The ending could have been better, but in general, this is as good as it gets. Trunks and Goten are suuuuuuuuch a good couple together. I want their relationship to become canon soooooooooooo bad, and this could and should be Toriyama’s template to create that. Heck, why not just use your work directly?! Genius my friend, genius...

I'm new to the yaoi world. I now this story has its time already, maybe you won't see this but i really enjoyed this love story. I wanted to thank you for your hard word and fluffiness. Is my first Trunks/Goten fic I read, I really liked it!

In all your storys you make everything that happened a dream in the last 2 chapters which I hate because it ruins the whole story so then when that comes I stop reading I have not finished one story by you so if you could stop doing that it would be great thank you

I agree with the other review. I love this story and I do not see why no one else is commenting. I adore Trunks and Goten together so I love that the majority of your stories have to do with them getting together. I will now go read them all c:

I'm really sad that this story doesn't have any comments. In actuality its a really good story. I love how yoi have portrayed Trunks and his overprotective-ness. After reading 11 chapters and I'm in love with this story. Its simply amazing. A part of me is afraid to continue reading it because it pulls at my heart strings...I'm afraid something bad will happen...the othet part is giddy about finding such a great story. So thank you for the update