Shame you killed the cullens, Edward i would have been fine with, but the rest... the live story between caius and bella in the other hand was beyond amazing... I LOOOOOVVVVVVEEEDDDD it

Oh this story is so much fun!

I absolutely loved it, but felt the ending slightly rushed but loved it

ya know if you are going to write stories at least write your own, dont steal other peoples stories and claim them as your own you even made the title similar. People tae a look at stuck in volterra by onwind you will see

Good first chapter, but this sounds like the same two stories you wrote before. To change it up, I would've had a different Volturi guard be her "babysitter." Like Jane or Alec, for instance? With their terrifying powers, they could make for a great threat to Bella and create conflict for the story. I know Bella has that mental shield, but you could pretend that she doesn't have it and their powers work on her, so that makes them even more dangerous to Bella. I would definitely consider it, but it's your story. This is just a suggestion and my own opinion. Keep up the good work.

Love it! Great chapter!

Aweeeeeeee girl power!

Wow! Great book! Impressed! Amazing Read

.EVER! I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING! XD You're writing for this story is superb! Can't wait to read the next chapter )
PS: Still can't stop laughing XD

:-)

Wonderful story

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AWESOME

YES SHE'S DEAD

loooooooool