Hello, friends!

I've spent quite a while considering what I'm about to ask you. But I think it's important.

I originally wrote this story because it was an idea in my head that would not leave me alone. It's initial conception was as a comic book, and the first few chapters were a reflection of the comic book script being translated into prose.

Personally... I don't think it translated very well.

Additionally, I've learned much more about writing and storytelling in the time since I started writing these stories.

And considering the amount of time it's taken me to work on the sequel, when I have a third act planned...

I have a proposal: I would like to rewrite (for streamlining purposes) and repost both "Doomed" and "The Measure of a Man."

Thus, it comes to the question: Would you guys be interested in my doing this?