Yeah, my first try in writing a story...I will do my best but the updates will be slow because I've got a lot od school work to do and I will likely change some things in the story from time to time if I don't like it, please tell me if the story is ok

He stared up at the huge stone walls that surrounded the building. A dense fog lay around the area and the full moon was shining brightly behind it. Above the wooden gate stood in big letters: "Konoha – Hunting – Academy". The night air was cold, especially in this light forest, and he shivered as the harsh wind blew past his coat and messed up his already messy hair.

There were no sounds. It was as if the forest was dead. As if all the animals had fled before him, fearing what he would lead to this place, if he stayed to long. If they managed to follow his scent this far and he knew they would.

The child on his back stirred and pulled at his shirt. "Where are we?" He looked back at the trembling 8 year old. Blood stained the childs night clothes and he was still crying. "Why are we here?"

He ignored the questions for the moment and walked closer to the gate. If he didn't hurry and got out of here the hunters would have his head. Not that it would matter since he saw no chance to escape his pursuers at all. Sighing he sat the child down and kneeled before him. "I have to leave now, but you will be save here. I promise ok". The child looked up at him with large teary eyes and slowly nodded. "Good, now look here" His eyes turned a deep red color as he leaned in closer and looked into the childs eyes, catching him. "I'm sorry, this happened, but I have to make sure you won't remember, at least most of it".

Surprised eyes widened, before their owner fell unconscious against the others chest. Laying the child down and draping his coat over the small body he stood up and looked at the gates. Behind them people were running around and screaming things to one another while he could hear the sirens give alarm. He snorted. What a turmoil just because of a 13 year old fullblood and a little halfblood, which they didn't even noticed yet. But they wouldn't hurt the boy, that much he knew. Looking at the child laying there in the dirt for a last time, he speed away into the direction of the thicker forest. Away from the city into the deeper forest, where innocent people wouldn't get involved into the fight that would likely come up soon.

Dawn was about to come and constantly fighting of his pursuers had him slowing down. Every minute he continued jumping through the trees he got more tired, thinking if he shouldn`t just give up. He had lead them away far enough. They wouldn't find the boy.

That's when he was stroke down by a giant fireball. He fell hard on the cold earth. His head felt dizzy and he coughed up some blood. They had him. He couldn't stand up anymore.

His pursuers surrounded him, cutting of any possible escape and sneering at his weak state. One of them came forward standing himself right in front of him, looking down at his tattered body with an unreadable expression in his face. He knew the punishment for treason.

"Tell me where you hide that bastard and we will forget about the whole thing".

Glaring up into the cruel eyes of his pursuers surrounding him he slowly sank into the welcoming darkness of unconsciousness, knowing that he had sealed his fate.

AN: As you probably noticed I changed some things, again ^^