Hello everyone,

I write fanfics just for fun, so I don't really have a set update schedule. I'll most likely be writing songfics or one-shots(or two-shots) instead of full blown stories. But occasionally I will write full stories, they'll most likely be Mahou Shoujo Madoka Magica central or any other anime.

Also, I apologize ahead of time about any grammar mistakes or spelling errors. I don't have a beta reader, but I do try my best while looking over what I have written. Any constructive criticism is welcome so that it may help in my writing. However there is a difference between just plain out hating and trying to point out mistakes. Flames are not tolerated(reason why it's called flames). Thank you.

I review fics a lot, at least whenever I have time to read them(mostly at night when I'm supposed to be sleeping. I curse a lot so srry not srry for my profanities but yeah. Here's a little something about me: I say dude in some of my comments and in my daily life a lot. It's kind of a habit I picked up a year ago lol. I also say dude in my head a lot. Well that's just a weird fact about me.) Though, recently I've been reviewing as a guest bc I'm too lazy to log into my account. I like how I write better in my reviews than in my stories, lmao.

Okay so this sections you don't rlly have to read. But some Sayaka, Mami, and other PMMM character haters might be interested. Even some of their fans might be interested.

So to those ppl who have read my comments on stories or somehow know that I hate Sayaka and Mami and even Madoka herself sometimes because I've mentioned it before: Major spoilers ahead

Sayaka:

Why I hate:

Okay, think about it. Homura has been repeating that same damn month for billions of years, she's probably past more than 100 years already. She even attempted to befriend Sayaka the first few timelines but Sayaka has been anything but nice to her. Notice how in the anime and even fanfictions(good authors hint this and other authors just go along with the mainstream) state that Homura is only tolerated whenever she has braids and glasses. First of all she looks weaker and not as powerful. An immediate like for Sayaka because she wants to be the hero of the story right? So she needs a damnsel in distress to fight off the evil villain. So whenever Homura changes her look to be the cool looking girl, Sayaka hates her because she smarter than her, stronger than her, and is a threat. Which is also a reason why she's friends with Madoka. Sayaka accuses Homura of being like what MAMI told her about all the OTHER magical girls. Homura is apparently selfish and thinks only for herself, killing witches but no familiars because she wants the grief seed. AHAHAHA, don't make me laugh. Homura will never leave a familiar to live because even a familliar is deadly, and she'd never put Madoka in harms way. She barely even thinks of her own life, her whole existence is based solely on Madoka. She will never be selfish in my eyes, even if she were. Her intentions were pure at the beginning at least. Sayaka only hates Homura because Sayaka looked up to Mami because of all the hero of justice crap and Mami distrusted Homura because of her appearance. Lol, doesn't she know the saying don't judge a book by its cover? Mami ASSUMED Homura was like all the other magical girls so Sayaka assumed that too. Sayaka claims Homura is evil, but is that really true? Sayaka claims that Homura will be the death of Madoka, but are you sure it isn't you or Mami? Sayaka thinks Mami is the hero, the strongest of them all. But Mami is just an outer shell, she already past broken. With just a twist of few words, she will go on a killing rampage. She will break and turn into a witch or kill everyone around her and thus committing suicide afterwards. Sayaka, oh Sayaka you damn fool. Short girly, pink hair, cute attitude = damsel in distress. dark look, average height, cool look, strange attitude, stone cold, supposedly "unfriendly" = villain. Homura has been fighting for multiple years, and it's even mentioned in the anime that she once cared about Mami, Kyouko, and Sayaka too. But they always turned on her even when she cared about them, so since they were always killed off, her main goal became Madoka because Madoka never turned on her. Madoka was the sole reason why she lived for another day. She saved her. That's why Homura loves Madoka. Sayaka is just too cruel to Homura, she doesn't even bother to look past the walls Homura built around herself, but Madoka did. Madoka was the only one who was brave enough to climb it.

Why I like:

Okay, so even though I hate Sayaka, and I believe she the most idiotic anime character that had ever lived. I kinda feel pity for her. Even though her wish was actually selfish as the interior, and exterior selfless; she must've loved Kyousuke a little bit. And she WAS the first to turn, even if she did deserve it. I don't have much reasons to like Sayaka, but she is nice.. if she's not in despair. And she does care about Kyouko.

Madoka:

Why I hate:

Homura can hate Madoka too. I guess really, she has mixed feelings for her. I know I would. Say you were in Homura's shoes, there was this friend you really truly cared about. Would die for him/her. You know of their fate, you know they will, and you know there's a way to prevent it. No matter how many times you hint, warn, and just plain out hold out a sign above your forehead telling of the terrible news. They will not listen. They keep ignoring your desperate words and pleas, and keeps on making the mistakes that leads to their despair, eventual suicide, or unnatural death. You love them with all your heart and soul(quite literally in Homura's case), yet they never care about your feelings either. They're selfless and think about every other person on the earth's feelings except yours. They don't think of what will happen to those that care about them. The hurt, the pain, the suffering. Homura feels frustration, anger, sadness, love, and hate for Madoka. I guess after all those timelines she just gave up on those other feelings because she will never rest until her wish was fulfilled, bc it's the only thing anchoring her to the earth. So she is kind of selfish, and desperate. Her wish was originally selfless, but then it turned selfish later on. See that's why I love PMMM, it may seem like the stereotypical magical girl anime or it might seem childish or just plain weird. Lol, if you look deeper into it, you'll see the darker side and how close to reality it is. It teaches how some people can start out so innocent, so childish. But then turn into selfish asses. It's sad but true, how the world turned out.

The only reason why I can deal with Madoka is because she is pretty caring. Even if she's a fucking coward crybaby who can't even handle some random person's death. I mean yeah death is a big thing, but you're going to fall into despair or make a fucking wish that's will literally create even more death and destruction just because of one death? I guess she really does take the saying "leave no one man behind" very seriously _ She also makes Homura happy at certain times so that's why I like her. but if none of this applied, I would hate Madoka. Life lesson: if you feel fucking useless in life, go fucking do something that will make you useful. Otherwise don't complain about being useless and fall into despair, because there's bound to be at least one person out there who cares for you or will care for you later in your life.

I'm not promoting suicide nor am I saying don't do it. Bc I know that feeling where you are so alone, and feel no one could possibly understand you. You have nothing in your life that could make you happy, and it's just better to end the suffering. If you feel that way, try writing out your sorrows, your rants, your despair. It helps, trust me. You can write it personally for just yourself to see, or other ppl who are suffering just like you. The internet may have many lies, but it can also have the most truth. Bc no one knows the true identity of any anonymous person on the internet, so ppl take it for granted and put things on here that they wouldn't even tell their closets friends. You'd be surprised to see that most ppl would think are lies are actually true.

Mami:

Personally I hate Sayaka more but Mami is the most broken and the second most corrupted(sayaka being the first). Okay so first off, if it weren't for mami, madoka wouldn't have died in timeline one in the first place. She would've been safely in the shelter with her family, either that or she wouldn't have had to suffer about anything and just live her life in ignorance. Then again, if it weren't for Mami, the love wouldn't have developed between Madoka and Homura(and it is obvious that Madokami loves homura too, even if it's a bit obscure) Mami is also one of the most selfish of the five. Okay her wish wasn't too selfish bc she was in a daze and didn't even know what was fucking happening when the car crashed. So I don't blame her for that one. However, she leads innocent Puella Magi to their deaths because of killing familiars instead of leaving them to grow into witches. Like i get that familiars can be killer, and it's bad and stuff but dude. It's a man eat man world, either you die or other ppl die. OR you fall into despair with no one caring about you and saving ppl who wouldn't even be grateful for what you did for them. HAHAHA, it's kinda sad really. Just like Homura, and all those times, Madoka never even realized how hard Homura has tried for her until her heart already turned black.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: Warning- Spoilers for Puella Magi ahead

Dark Paradise:

Rated T

Summary:

[SPOILERS[PRE/POST REBELLION[PLOT TWISTS[DIFFERENT FROM ORIGINAL PLOT[THREE ACTS[HOPING TO MAKE MORE THAN 50 CHAPTERS[MAIN FIC WILL HAVE SET SCHEDULE]No matter how many times it takes, she will save her. Even if it means giving up her own happiness. All she has to do is not give in to despair.

Disclaimer: I own nothing except for the plot and the OC Witch!

Characters: Homura, Madoka, Kriemhild Gretchen, Homulilly, Sayaka, Mami, Kyoko, Octavia, Canderloro, Ophelia, Nagisa, Charlotte, Hitomi, OC Witch(Briana), and slight mentions of Kyousuke.

Pairings: HomuDoka(Homura and Madoka), KyoSaya(Kyoko and Sayaka), Magisa(Mami Nagisa), HomuciferMadokami(Demoness Homura and Goddess Madoka), KrieMura(Kriemhild and Homura), HomulOka(Homulilly and Madoka), KrieMulilly(Kriemhild and Homulilly), Octphelia(Octavia and Ophelia), Chanderlotte(Charlotte and Canderloro), HitomiXKyousuke

So I am currently working on a new story(i know I do this a lot lol and it's a PMMM fic) it's called Dark Paradise- I literally got inspired by the song Dark Paradise and heard a PMMM version so I was like omg no one has done this before so I must do this. (At least I hope not- I want to say what it is so no one steals it but then people will steal it before I post it and ugh. so yeah, sorry if it might be something someone has done before in the past but currently I do not see any fics that have this theme...) All I will say is that it includes the three worlds. The one Madoka created, Homura created, and the main world where Homura goes back in time over and over. I will say it's definitely different from the anime and answers some unanswered questions but the answers aren't actually true, just my author's imagination. It also includes Kriemhild Gretchen, Homulilly, Homucifer, MadoKami, Madoka, Homura, Nagisa, Sayaka, Mami, Nagisa, Kyoko, Ophelia, An OC Witch(my own creation her name is Briana), Hitomi, Canderloro, Charlotte, Octavia, and slight mentions of Kyousuke. Also this fic will actually have a set update schedule! But srry to disappoint: only 4 times a month- one for each week. Extended explanation will be in the actual fic, so just wait till then! And just saying, this fic will come out sometime during Christmas weekend. Way too busy these two months. So just wait a bit longer. I have chapter one and two done but I wanna upload at least three chapters in the span of two days. So you guys have to wait just a bit longer.(now currently I've kinda lost interest in this for the moment because of writer's block but that's why I'm reading and reviewing lots of other fics to get that inspiration back. I found a really good one lately and it kinda got that spark back I need to find another one that will work even better. So sorry for the long wait but you fanfiction writers probably know the drill already. Lol trust me I know because I am one too. I understand it's extremely annoying to you readers to hear us authors say this millions of time and never update a story. But that's why I'm not promising anything. You have been warned. P.S. always read the fine lines under the big letters, lesson number one from PMMM.)

If you have any questions about my work, just PM me, or comment. Idrc which.

Also:

Disclaimer: I do not own PMMM, any of the songs, or cover arts. PMMM belongs to Shaft, the songs belong to their respected owners(the Kagerou Project songs belong to the youtuber JubyPhonic), and the cover arts are most likely found online. tbh, I feel that some copyright claims are so fucking stupid, like dude. Technically ppl think fanfictions break the "copyright" rule. Lol like wtf? You know how many people would be crushed if there no more fan made things? Millions of lives will be ruined, emotionally and literally. Some youtubers dedicate their whole life to fan stuff AND for their jobs.

-Kuro

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R and R~! :)