You are AMAZING!

NO! There HAS to be another chapter here... Ffnet must be hiding it. Is that it? Oooh please write more

Well that escalated quickly. Intense anger to intense hook up. Nicely done.

Squall's got some time to wrangle with all his emotions before he has to meet up with Rinoa again. I bet what you have planned for them is fantastic.

Finally! I love how you did this chapter and the delicious sex scene! Can't wait to read more, update soon please!

I love this story! You're amazing at writing and I can't wait to see how this goes for Seifer and Squall! They're one of my favorite pairings! That Rinoa better not get in between them :)

Oh come on! You can't end the chapter like that. That was mean. Evil cliff hanger! Evil! LOL.

Thing are getting really interesting between boys. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Please update soon.

Great job. Keep up the good work!

He he. Wow. So Squall really hate him. I guess he can hold a grudge for a long time. After their intense battle, I wonder how life will change for them both.

You have done an amazing job in keeping Seifer in character. You have done really well with him; sounds just like Seifer from the game, if a bit more mature. I can't wait to see how he will be received at garden and what his teaching methods will be like.

Great job. Keep it up.

Another great chapter. Really well written.

Good news for Rinoa, but what's that mean for Squall?

Cid is no longer around? Him. How old do you think he was in game? Edea was as young as Squall and gang. Lucky sorceress didn't age.

Looks like Squall's life is out of control. I hope the vacation will help.

Keep up the great work. I hope another chapter will come out soon.

Great first chapter. Lots of changes happened in the last 5 years after Ultimecia was defeated. Three left Garden and only two remained. Wow!

I think you have a fantastic job of keeping Squall in character. His thought process and his actions remain genuine to his character. *2 thumbs up*

Rinoa's situation was really surprising. Sacrifice she did indeed.

Wonder what happened to Cid, Edea, and Seifer.

Great start. Heading over to the next chapter. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to seeing another update soon.

Squall has gotten better! Huzzah! Revelry! I'm so happy! Magical kisses from magical assholes! Woo!

And Seifer and Squall's progress - hot damn, I can't wait for more. Hot Stuff! I hope Quisty doesn't beat the crap out of Seifer over that. Especially when Squall is going to be so overwhelmed and confused by everything.

Thanks for the update, it was a great read! :)

omg. I love your s/m personalities for Squall and Seifer. It's super great and I'm like for realz excited about how you're building up their relationship and what it's going to turn into. :D

Thank you for posing this lovely story and I can't wait to see where it goes! :3

Good start for an interesting story. I would like to know more.
Is there any possibility that Seifer is also with Matron? Any maybe Squall isn't really asexual, he just hasn't found his other half..hehe...very interesting indeed...

This is one amazing story. The details are amazing! I personally just bought the game on Steam because I could hardly remember the storyline and I love the game! Wonderful job on that! I love your writing style and can't wait until Seifer comes into the story!