That was extremely hot. I wish I could write a threesome or foursome like that. Thank you for writing this story! You made my day!

Oh woah. This was interesting. I liked the yullen and yuvi and laven bits a lot and the three were extremely nice to Lenalee. I'm glad Lenalee didn't label herself

I don't have words to say how much I adored it. Writing all the four of them might have been complicated, but even though it's confusing through some parts it's just amazing.
I have a kinky for all of them together and I'll be forever grateful to you for fulfilling it

yay luvin it dahling!~~~

beautiful work that needs more views and reviews
lenalee is a lucky girl

the dynamics here was particularly interesting, I liked it a lot. sometimes I think poly is really hard to get right but even with the OT4 it works, so, kudos!

A few grammar and spelling mistakes, nothing major though. Self/0-editing is tricky business.

I really like where you went with this. All four of them are believably in character, and their interactions (especially the bickering of a certain duo) were well written. The sex was good too-well plotted out, not too rushed or too slow, and just the right amount of detail to be spine-tingling.

I like this because its hot

Djvosbelfne! That was HOT! You should continue it with another chapter with Kanda doing Allen while he does Lenalee and she gives Lavi head. XD

Omg why are there no reviews! I this is really hot and great and I hope you wrote more like this