Reviews for Dark Whispers
misspop9 chapter 3 . 2/10/2014
I love the story so far and I like how Resinous and Kyoko r dating instead of ShoxKyoko or RenxKyoko.
Jacquelineizidro chapter 3 . 2/6/2014
I have been reading your fanfiction but for some reason I do not know I can not seem to understand it so please clear my mind. Is the story between Reino and Kyoko or Koun and Kyoko? Will something happen between them that Kyoko will stay with Koun? Sorry I am just a bit confused because I thought the story was between my favourite couple ( Koun anf Kyoko)
Zero Andreasen chapter 2 . 2/3/2014
Love it! I mean I'm both a ReinoXKyoko fan and a KuonXKyoko fan! I mean i'm torn in the middle with this story! I really love it! I hope you update soon!
EverlastingRyo chapter 2 . 2/3/2014
I'm now officially confused your description of how you're characters acts is confusing, on the first chapter you portrayed Reino as gay and has a thing for Sho but on the second one you wrote that he's Kyoko's boyfriend and also the stories' setting is too fast there's no cliffies I know I know readers hate that but that's once if the things that makes them come back for more there's no climax either. Sorry for being a bit mean but I'm just giving you a bit of advice as a fellow writer.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/31/2014
Great job but actually isn't kuon scarier since even renio is afraid of kuon as tells kyoko to stay away from him because he's dangerous
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
I really love how you wrote this seems like it's going to be quite amusing I truly look forward to what you have in store for us as your readers can't wait until next time thnx so much, and great job
Guest chapter 2 . 1/30/2014
Will Kyoko and ku
panda00 chapter 2 . 1/30/2014
it doesn't make sense ! i thought that Kyoko will be dating Kuon but it didn't happened at all *sulk* life is hard. but hopefully i wanna see that Kuon and Kyoko are a couple. update soon !
LovetheThrill chapter 2 . 1/30/2014
They are going out? Really? That's the most surprising ever :)
Oh well,i am at lost right know..
Zero Andreasen chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
I LOVE IT! I love how you had Kuon go to Kyoko's school as a senior and have them meet like that and her not realize until the end. Love it! Please update soon!
misao97 chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Wooooohooooooo! They got together?! On the first day they met?! And she knows that he is Corn?! This is the best fic ever! Lol i really really like it! And i absolutely love high schools settings for SB, there are not a lot our there. I really can't wait to see what happens next! I bet that it's reino spying on them hehehe. Please update soon! Gambatte!
LovetheThrill chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
An interesting opening,even if it's a little fast forwad ;)
I wanna see they are geting more close before Sho kind of confront them.
Thank's
Rycans chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Next chapter, pleaseeeeeee! Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa / *fangirling scream*
Oh my, u must continue this story! Pleaseeeee! *jumping in joy*
Really pleaseeeee *dogeza state*
VKLOREO23 chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Holy shiz i jjust rose from me seat cause that was awesome it seemed a little foward but the fact that they knew each other already is fine i think haha so please update persona
onliafaze chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
You're writing has room for improvement, but it's an interesting premise. If i were to be so bold as to make a suggestion...

Assuming that 'someone evil' is in fact sho, don't go too over the top with him in the next chapter. He JUST rejected and insulted her, so if he wants to maintain the cool appearance he treasures so much, he can't go full sociopath yet. He needs to start by subtly worming into Kyoko's life.

Feel free to disregard. Either way, I'm curious to see where this goes.
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