This is the type of fanfic that would have thousands more reviews and favorites if more people knew about the series-I think it was incredibly written and true to the characters. Great job!

This is just absolutely fantastic. Should have happened this way in game. That's it, adding the whole story to my headcanon now! :-)

I love how much Varania's diction matches Fenris' curiously eloquent (for a slave) patterns of speech. Like that's either the typical way of speaking for Tevinter, or a family trait. Either way, it's a beautiful detail.

I love how you write Varania, and the dynamic between her and Fenris.

that was an amazing story. I liked the. challenges with demons and really felt the emotional rollercoaster with each one. mostly I love how you portrayed Varania. her stubbornness and pride matching Fenris'. wish this is how it really ended in the game. fenris deserves family, and I personally like Varania.

I really liked seeing Vanaria in a light other than the bitch that turned Fenris in. I feel like she'd be just as you've showed her to be in this story. It makes sense that it would happen like this and I don't doubt that she'd act just as she has. Great job. It makes me wish we had this option in the game. Not just let her live but to keep her in Kirkwall to be a part of our group and watch Fenris and her forgive each other and become brother and sister again.

Oh, this was just so well done. I put off reading it until it was all out and until I could manage to get my Fenris/Varania feelings courage bolstered up enough to venture in, and I'm actually glad I did because now I am in a place where I can appreciate it fully. 3

Another great story from you :)
I've read all your Fenris/hawke stories and you're so good with capturing their personalites.
Thanks for writing such nice stories!

So amazing! I even teared up during the part with Hawke's father. So emotionally gripping and just a wonderful read overall. You know how I feel about your writing already based on all of my previous reviews haha, so I part this one with a huge thank you for writing this and to take care!

Geez I love your stories. One of my favorite things about them is the way that they could all have happened in the same universe to the same Hawke and Fenris, or they could all be different. This one is no exception, I enjoyed it to the very last. I especially liked h,ow you were willing to explore Varania where so many players and writers kind of dismiss her.

Just perfect. Thank you for such a great story.

I know I've said this before, but I love how much Varania is Fenris's sister - just as stubborn, just as terse, just as strong. It really makes me want to see Iphi - their mother (dammit, she's forever Iphigenia to me now) because I bet she taught it to them.

And Hawke and Varania and Fenris and Varric and Toby... it's just gorgeous. Espeically Varania.

Great story! I enjoyed reading it very very much! Keep up the amazing work! :)

If you don't write more stories with Varania I might explode. I mean seriously this fic has gotten me spoiled with the interactions between her and Fenris. There are no others like it and it's killing me.

Quark I readily anticipate your next story because they never fail to completely pull me in and get me fully addicted.

A world with too few family ties, true loves and happy-ever-afters needs more stories like this one. As a reader, I want to thank you for taking this could-have-been/might-have-been, stand-alone chapter and gifting another magnificent seven chapters ; making my world a wonderful place. Thank you.