YES! That was really good. I was wondering if Sei ever bottomed and voila!

THIS IS SO GOOD! YAY! DAMN!

This is amazing and so hot. I'm going to read the following chapters in the near future. Just wow. Damn.

That last part though. Aww, Momo... Congratulations for being the Founder of SeiMako Week!

Another perfect one added to this wonderful collection! I loved it like I adore all the other ones!

I do believe Haruka would be mad if they cleaned themselves by using the pool, bad Sei! (even if it would be sexy, I suppose the showers will have to do for the second round they most likely would have!)

These joint practices are my favourite because then my two most prized babies can be as naughty as they want :) I still marvel at the way you write smut so effortlessly and briliantly! I mean, every time I feel so much hotter after I’ve read one of these chapters :)

I’m going to be sad when it’s over because this story in my opinion is just utter perfection. No one writes these two better than you and no one ever will!

I don’t ever want to hear you apologise for perfection because that’s just not right! This was a joy to read and I’m looking forward for more

Keep this up because this is pure GOLD!
Lots of love!

OH NO HE DIDN’T! HOW COULD HE?!
I cannot believe Sei fell asleep! Like, how is that even possible? No matter how tired you are, sexy times with Mako is sexy times! And nothing should come between that! What a surprise to read this! Don’t get me wrong though my dearest, I did enjoy this but I am maybe slightly inclined to lock Sei and Makoto in a closet now and let them out when they’ve redeemed themselves a.k.a when Makoto has fucked Sei senseless! (yes, I am apparently that perverted…)

Makoto was super cute though, he just wanted to be as close to Sei as possible! Even if I haven’t forgiven him for falling asleep too! HELLLOOOOOOO, sexy times? I really think they should get their sexy on super hot and passionate next chapter because well, they just have to!

You may have not liked this one as much but I know I did! It was very adorable and sexy(when they weren’t actually sleeping) so I’m quite pleased with this chapter because it made me smile the entire time! I was wondering what they would do when they would have lazy morning sex and well… we all know how they tackled their morning! Loved reading this simply because it’s written by the most wonderful person/writer/friend/sweetheart ever!

Lots of love!

Heya Valli! I'm fashionably late as usual to your update once again, but that shouldn't surprise you anymore. :P
1st of Sep and my 1st urge was to back and check things here... Strange huh? (-.-);;
But it was a good call since there's 2 things to read from you now, so let's see what's in store!

... X'D
Sorry, sorry! But the fact that the next chap. you wrote took place on a lazy morning felt so fitting that it made me laugh for some reason!
Perhaps it's 'cuz that exactly how I feel at this moment? I dunno, still sleepy tbh. (w)
Just for that, I'm already liking this! ;D
There's something cute about the idea of the normally hustling 'n bustling Sei being sleepy. But everyone's gotta get some R&R, esp. when it constitutes to smexy snuggle-timez with your orca-bae! (wish i had one -3-)
The mood's very tranquil here, a sense of aloneness that isn't at all lonely. It's not so much about the sex as it is about having an intimacy that's just as if not more meaningful. It's like finally being finding a place where you're not just home, home is always with that special person... who won't mind at all that you're taking up personal space!
Makoto, you a silly orca-bby! x'3

You're putting up a good effort here as usual, even if it may not feel as satisfying than before w/ the last chapters. Not all the prompts attempted will feel like winners, but you did the best you could do here and that's what counts!
Next time will be even better so just keep finding the right inspiration Valli!
Take care now, see ya soon! :3

you have screwed my free! ships my friend... WHY ARE THEY SO EFFING CUTE OMFG.

For every day that passes when you've updated, it feels like I was late by twice that time. Not that there's anything to feel guilty over, but it's always on my mind... -_-;;
Though it appears that a welcome guest has returned to share in the SeiMako!
The more the merrier, so let's revel in this sizzlin' Summer smut! ;D

The idea of chest-waxing makes me cringe, it's all at once too! Very painful... D: Though it reminds me of a funny movie scene involving that situation, the context was entirely different!
Not sure who I feel more bad for; Makoto or Seijuuro? Each are having to deal with their own personal pains! xD
At least they were able to relieve some of their stress! (some more than the other ;3)
Ice cream, mmm... -w-
Bara-bbys w/ ice cream, MMMmm... -W-
It'll be rewarding when Seijuu keeps his word on that promise! ... And 'lo, he did! 8D
There was much squee's to be had from start to end. Although, it was rather surprising how it all "fell" into place... PFFtph! x333 (im such trash, i kno)

I saw nothing wrong from this as with any former chapters. The scenes played out in their according themes and their own unique twists fashioned by your engaging style, but that's just taking my word for it! :P
Valli, beating your own figural dead horse isn't the way! Dx
Look beyond missteps you've stumbled and see how many were taken! It's a long way still, so give yourself an applause! Negativity is thy foe, don't let yourself fall in that zone.
It's still a ways away from the end, you'll improve even more than now for sure!
For now, take care and see ya soon! :3

Maybe you should really try and explain to me why you are bad at smut because I seriously don’t see the problem.. The smut was absolutely fucking amazing!

I did feel a bit sad that Makoto pushed Sei out of the bed, but of course, our sexy little devil just got back in the game as if nothing happened! And we all know that sometimes a change in position does wonders :)

I loved the fact that they at least started off on the bed and then moved to the floor! They could’ve started out on the floor from the beginning and yet, you and your creative mind came up with a nice little twist, even if it probably leaves Sei with a purple bruise on his cute little bottom, however, I’m sure Makoto can just kiss it better, can he not? :D

Seriously, I do have to ask you, will you do something in a closet? Since we’ve talked about it, I just cannot keep it out of my mind and I would love to read something like that :D However, even if you don’t, I’ll gladly read anything you come up with because yes I’m addicted and yes I’m not afraid to damn well admit it :D

So to sum everything up again, the smut was PERFECT, you are SUPER CREATIVE, you are simply the BEST and dammit I just love these two when you write them! So I’ll just sit back now and patiently wait for the next update because when I receive the notice for a new update, my world stops spinning for a few seconds while I just smile until my cheeks hurt! The things you and your stories do to me…

I LOVE U!

I feel bad for both of them! Poor Makoto for having to grow to that painful experience but then SEI?! I actually found it funny at first because seriously, getting so aroused in public when Makoto goes through a hair waxing? Is our gorgeous redhead serious? :)

I can comprehend that the groans and moans(though not caused by arousal) can make someone as sexy as our redhead devil completely hot and bothered! He thought he’d just have to comfort his boyfriend but nope, he had another bigger problem to deal with! How do you come up with this? 1000 points for this one my dear!

Of course, my fav part was the part where Sei had to take refuge in the bathroom and our sweet little Makoto helped him take care of that problem in Sei’s pants! Makoto is such a sweetheart, is he not? How naughty of them to do something like that in public, but it was well worth it! I can imagine Sei dragging Makoto off for a repeat treatment in the future :)

The smut was great, the chapter was great, who am I kidding, it was just another perfect one! I’m going to be sad if you reach the end because I don’t want this to ever end! Hell, I don’t want you to ever stop writing because I need your stories to get me through my lazy days of recovery… and just in general, I need your brilliant talent!

I really enjoyed this update so thank you so much for it!

Lots of looooooooooooove!

While searching through the pages of Mikoshiba's section, there's nothing quite as lifting to see new chappies from your 30-Day SeiMako-series. And this means you're 1/2-way through now! Good for you! ;D
Let's see how things heat up this time!

If there's something that should be a must for these writing challenges, it's this!
A special moment between lovers that mean the world to each other and expressing it through intimacy and words of love. With no rush or need to quench, all their emotions are bared to each other, letting them see beyond instincts into something more. It's an esoteric incident which can only be understood through the same or a similar experience. The kind which could only be called nothing else than "lovemaking". 8')

Woah, that sounded pretty poetic. Was I always such a romantic? 8P
Shortly summed; this gave me super-duper, heartwarming, ugly-tear-faced, squeal-suppressed feelz! Which may not be said for others who've read but may have kinda felt.
You've become more into your writing element
lately, way to go Valli! ;)
Hope to see where it'll go from here! Take care 'til next time! :3

Why isn’t this a good ending? It’s such a sweet line to end with! :) it just portrays their passionate and sweet relationship perfectly!

Leave it to Sei to take watching a movie to the next level with some of his most innocent yet perfectly mastered touches, no wonder Makoto is usually left at his complete mercy!

The chapter was indeed very passionate with a hint of wonderful sweetness! Sei is just always so masterful, asking Makoto questions leaving him so flustered and hot and bothered! Reading this story does make me sad that Sei doesn’t appear in season two all that much, instead we got his cute brother but still, it’s not the same! Sei deserves so much more and well, I’m glad I still have this story to give me my healthy and sexy dose of the redhead!

I’m both happy and sad to have reached the end of the updates! I loved reading everything and it has made me so happy to finally be able to be back and review this wonderful piece of work :) I know there will be more in the future and I can’t wait to read what you have in store for us next! In case you were still doubting, yes I’m addicted, I’ve always been and always will be!

Perfect as always!

*Hands you a ton of love*

I was wondering whether there would ever be a chapter that contains this position, and just when I clicked the button for the next chapter, there it was(imagine my perverted smile when I started reading :) )

I cannot get over the fact how perfectly written this was, the descriptions were mouth-watering and just… I don’t even have words for it. It may have not been overly long but I don’t mind because it’s perfect the way it is! There simply is no room for improvement!
I for one will never complain when these two get their sexy on because well… I’m just addicted to this story and I’m proud of it too! I may still be a bit clustered to my bed but if I can do this while recovering just a tiny bit more, I can be happy and at peace!
These two… hot damn!

All my love is for you!

Gah playful and teasing Sei! The intro was just so precious I broke out into a little fit of laughter! What would happen if Sei accidentally picked out the shampoo of Makoto’s parents, god wouldn’t that be awkward? Oh well, they could just go get another shower and then you know… (why do I always sound so perverted?!)

Makoto, god Makoto, he’s just everything isn’t he! Giving Sei so much pleasure, god it was hot to read! Loved the fact that he teased Sei by not taking off his own clothes immediately, that must have driven our hot and sexy redhead totally crazy! And yup it did because Sei asking Makoto for more was just… oh wow!

I immensely enjoyed this chapter just as much as I’ve enjoyed the previous ones and I know I’ll love and adore the future ones too because everything that you write is simply gold! I know you were in the front of the row when they handed out the writing talent! Yes my dear, it’s the damn truth!

Love, love, love you