Oh God, You Have To Write A Chapter Where They Tell Abby! That Would Be Amazing! I Could See Abby Scolding Both Tony & Gibbs! XD

& Ducky Knows Right? & Palmer Would Probably Know Too, Just From Being In Autopsy So Much Because Both Tony & Gibbs Go Down There To Vent To Ducky & Would Probably Just Over Hear Something. XD

love it too cute

I love it! I wish you would go on, I would love to see Abby's reaction. I love them together, is so sweet. Gibbs getting the chance to really love again and Tony finally being loved, cherished and with someone who would never abandon him.

Cute story

That's cute! :D

I liked it very much... don't get enough Tibbs these days.

oookkkk! Whatever works!

I liked it.

i like the stories Tibbs please write a story of Tony with the brokenheart and Gibbs confort him and falling in love

I will admit that I don't do slash well - have no problem with it for real people but don't read it much - just like I don't read NCIS much. But the final twist here again got me laughing so that my stiches threatened to pop - the very idea of Abby on the warpath is almost as scary as Hetty on the warpath - both can hurt you in soooo many ways

Well, I'd say you were off to a good start! :). Looking forward to more.

Cute story! Love Tony and Gibbs!

Awesome job it is hard to believe this is your first NCIS fic. I sure hope you decide to make this more than a one shot. Would love to see them moving in together.

cute story.

very well written.

good first story.

Great start to writing. Story was good...kept everyone true to character. Keep writing...I'll keep reading.