Story's good so far but there are a considerable number of typos scattered about.

Whatever happened to this?

Honestly i can’t read this story. Naruto is pathetic and I hate how you made him be his canon counterpart despite how different your story is to canon. The fact he chases after his parents affection after years of neglect is absolutely pathetic and makes Naruto look like a pussy who can’t stand up for himself.

The chapters are great can you fix up the others and update asap please.

Thank you so much for writing this story, it has to be one of the best and creative Naruto stories I have ever read. I hope that one day you can go back to writing it again.

Oh no rabbit rangers are here.

... wtf lol. These purring orbs gave me nightmares.

Lmao

Naruto is insect repellant lol

Is this ignoring and not ever having explained why a third person is with juubi and naruto serve a purpose? If it is, you should have at least had a reason for it instead of inserting and have everyone wonder if its a mistake or whole section of story was deleted.

And everyone can shut the F up about spelling and grammer its trash filling up comment section.

I have reread the chapter three times and cannot for the life of me figure out why naruto has three voices in his head. Is one his own thought and him also speaking out loud? Or am i missing some really important plot point here? I am not sure if i read this fic or not but if i have i do not remember any of it. Been on my favorites list for a while

Please fix your grammar, I have hard time reading this.

Good work, your grammar throw me off a bit though.

Love this story and all the cute moments especially with the seeds, but damn... Naruto is WAY too forgiving.

Idiot