Reviews for Obey Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() plz update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed and sighed too much for this story. Laughed, because of the spanish, cause I loved the Spanish and sarcasm. Just, very naice. -TEW01 |
![]() ![]() i loooove this. please continue! |
![]() ![]() I love your work! Each chapter was enjoyable and I get so caught up in the emotional aspect that I find it very easy to forget that Cato's blackmailing Peeta. But, there's so much more to good old 'to other than him being a cold hearted, drug dealer and Peeta a scarred, blushing virgin. That's what's so great; I eagerly await further chapters filled with emotional development, sexy time, and Clove! Thank you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh so good I need more! |
![]() ![]() Update soon. |
![]() ![]() This was great as usual:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks! WOW! Peeta expressed an orgasm two days in a row. One by himself and the other by Cato's hand. It was so mind blowing for Peeta who couldn't stop himself, but relish in the pleasure that Cato gave him. Cato was being so sweet and gentle with Peeta. He treated him like procelin doll. Peeta doesn't understand it. Wonder what is going to happen in the bath.. Peeta is in denial about the sexual assault. Cato knows it was real. You don't have nightmares that excessive without it being real. I think that Peeta has doubts, but they are buried so deep that he doesn't want to acknowledge them. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooooo things are starting to get hot! :D woooo can't wait for more, and for Peeta to plunge down the rabbit hole of pain and pleasure. Amazing work boo! Xo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi again! I didn't think you'd update this! Bless Peeta, getting all embarrassed over that phone sex. Cato is loving the fact that he can just drive Peeta crazy. And the smut! We love the smut even if it doesn't go all the way as of yet. Ooh! A bath now? Well well well, I wonder what will be happening in the next chapter? ;D I actually found no typo's. Good job on that! Duty Calls! (For Peetato :D) Celsius |
![]() ![]() ![]() So. Phone Sex. Trust Cato. So Peeta touches himself up for the first time in forever. I wonder when we will see another flash of Peeta's past. I guess I'll have to wait very patiently. :D Good stuff, I'm following. Duty Calls! Celsius |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yikes, I'm stunned! Poor Peeta, and trust Seneca to be the peadophile. I understood some of the Spanish, because I take it, but I'm terrible at languages, so thanks for the translations there. I think Cato is finding out more about Peeta than he's letting on. Duty Calls! Celsius |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Peeta is stuck, and Cato has got him in a hold. I wonder how this will progress... ;) Peeta is obviously a bit annoyed at having to be a slave for Cato, but I can tell that he's going to like it. Duty Calls! Celsius |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh-Oh! Rye has really got Peeta into a pickle! So what will Peeta do next I wonder? And I wonder if Cato's lust will turn to love? Duty Calls! Celsius |
![]() ![]() I read most all of your stories, hope you update this one soon. |