Tu fanfiction no me gusto para nada, nada de lo que esperaba leer, dislike. bayyy

continues

Plainly fascinating. The plot and characters are consistent, realistic and simply great to watch. Plz contribute more stories to do community

In regard to your masterpiece, I have to say that this is exceptionally stupendous. Love the ship and the realistic plot you planned out. Have my genuine praise .

Hey, I originally reviewed this as an unsigned in user 'oregairuisgreat' as you might have seen, but I felt it necessary to come back in my account to tell you how awesome this story is.(and fav it) It really played true to the characters of the series, and I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. good luck from a fellow aspirating fanfiction author.
Cheers

Nice story, would fit as a great epilogue of sorts. When one of my friends online told me about this anime, I stayed up all night and finished it. It was just that good, so thank you for making this, along with making my favorite pairing. By the way, I got that detective Conan reference in Ch4

Another great chapter, although I was a bit put off that they were meeting each other's parents for the first time after dating for 6 years. I don't no how stuff like that works in Japan, but I doubt it's like that. Still, great stuff, it's nice to see a happy Snafu story.

Great chapter. As Wayfarer said, the grammar could be inproved a bit, but it is still much better than the average fanfiction's. Keep up the great work!

An update o.O

Your dialogue is very difficult to follow because you are violating the rules of grammar regarding quotations. What it comes down to is that we do not know who is talking.

For example, when Hachiman is talking to Yui:

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"I can't promise you anything actually. I can't promise you that'll all get better because I can't see the future."
"Therefore cry. Let your unhappiness flow out now. It'll hurt more if you keep it in. Trust me I know."
~~

This is wrong, and you do it everywhere. Because you separated them into separate paragraphs, the grammar rules state that *another* person is talking. Therefore, when reading that, anyone who has a good grasp of English grammar will think that Yui spoke the second line. However, in your fic, you have Hachiman speaking both lines. The correct way to handle this is to remove the end quote on the first line:

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"I can't promise you anything actually. I can't promise you that'll all get better because I can't see the future.
"Therefore cry. Let your unhappiness flow out now. It'll hurt more if you keep it in. Trust me I know."
~~

Other options include labeling who is speaking ("he said") or combining the dialogue into a single paragraph instead of splitting every sentence into its own.

Love ur fanfic! Best couple- Hikki & yukino! Loved every chapter dude! :)

Nooo... YUI! I am crying for you :'(
But this is great :)

Wow just... Wow

Im on tam yuigahama on this one XD

Is this the end? I love how you portrait Hachiman's proposal so much! These two are really best suited for each other.