This story certainly got my attention. I enjoyed it up until Hermione was killed, but that doesn't mean it wasn't well written. Thank you for sharing it with us, and I'm heading for the final chapter.

Fuuuuuuuuck... I've been reading your Fate stuff and i absolutely LOVED it. I thought i'd give your Potter-verse a shot and, how do i say this, it's not very good. Simple as that. You write a good Shirou but your Harry is pants. Even for an AU you deviate way too much from cannon. In dumb ways. Like, what's the deal with Nevil's gran cookin? Also, that is not at all the way a neglected semi traumatized ANYONE would behave. It feels to me like you read the Harry Potter books-or watched the movies-and were like, 'if that was ME', and just ran with it. Bad choice that. So, to reiterate, Shirou fics: fan-fuckinTASTIC! Harry stuff: big WTF...

No, no, the world of Harry Potter without Hermione should not exist at all... Sorry, your storry is attractive, but it is sort of too sad for me... Thank you for hours of good reading.

Hey, thanks for a story that's indefinably you. I particularly liked your part 1 trilogy more, but HG dying is not that big a deal even though she's usually one of my fav. ships. :D You wove it in naturally. Another thing is, I think Harry received an owl from Neville in the first trilogy so, it's not true that he's not received an owl before. Spelling error duel, not dual. There were just a couple of typo or grammatical errors but the story still flows well.

Just finished this one, and I have to say that whoever dropped your story because of the first few chapters of Zero made a big mistake, since it really got better. Still, if you could re-write them...

Anyway, I liked this one more than the first, with clear characters developement. And thanks Merlin you didn't kill Sirius. At the point where I read about Harry calling him as back up, I swore that I would drop this the moment Sirius died, lol.

Not that I'm not sad for Hermione, quite the opposite in fact, but she'd had her own character arc, so it wasn't as ridiculous that she died instead of Sirius. Still, it just isn't the same, since I'm sort of a perfect freak when it comes to characters that I care about. I always strive for the perfect endings where everyone lived when playing games like Fire Emblem or Mass Effect, lol.

Good job, now to the next one.

Hello. I must say, I have read the prequel to this story, and am reading this one, of course, and I am quite a fan of your writing style. It flows well, and I have never wanted to skip over paragraphs, like I have been tempted to do in other stories.

Also, I have a prediction for this story. It might even be revealed later in this very chapter, but I haven't read it all the way through yet . I just have to ask; is Adam a Golem? I mean, the Hebrew word written on the forehead is necessary, and he's Jewish, not to mention size, strength, and age. It was mentioned that he wasn't human in the last story, I believe. I noticed these signs and just had to ask.

I really like your writing; keep it up!

Sincerely,
Tamane Deverel

I love Harry/Luna stories , Harry grows in this fic, nice to see it is logical and not super Harry in 5 chapters. I like Luna on this fic, she is more cunning than anyone realises. I'm an on to the next in the trilogy. fun read.

I did not think you were just going to off Hermione like that, that really fucked me up I look forward to the last one.

That was not what I expected. But that is the gift of a good story. To take you places you haven't been.

Well he's got different backup this time. Can't wait to read how that effects things.

Interesting take on Lupin

That is so weird. I was going to use this review to ask where Adam was from. Though some googling led me close it didn't mention him by name. I'd love to read more on him.

Nasty dreams Harrys having.

Well not the worst outcome for the trial.

SPOILER, Chapter 6. Very immersive. I'm not sure about Harry's feelings though. Either he is insensitive and dead inside or you are not conveying his emotions. I mean, Hermione is dead and Harry sounds a bit annoyed about it like I would if I bought the wrong brand of washing powder by mistake. It was a shocker though. She was incomplete, progressing, her story still unfolding - then gone in an instant like all the rest of her pages have been torn away. That is exactly what JKR was trying to convey about death.

I do like the grey, fuzzy things in the story. None of the relationships are black and white and squeaky clean - they are kind of muddled like in real life. You can't always tell who's good or bad or what they are feeling inside - same as in reality. Makes for a very interesting story. I like it.