These two are always adorable.

They should've focused a little more on what the Benders were feeling after their bending was taken away. This was a good insight.

I really like this, even though Lin doesn't babe her bending back. I would like to see Kya help her accomplish that... with tons of cuteness and love of course (:

"But air didn't come to her. Another failed relationship." Damn, Chloe! That was deep! (have you tried writing poetry? lol)
So, yeah. I almost cried. Actually, I did cry just a little. Lin Beifong is my heart so I was so sad to see her upset like this! I enjoyed this story, great job!

really good work here , given the circumstances and alcohol Lin would break down at some point just like this, luckily Kya understands, you capture both of them believably, i was caught in the atmosphere from the very first line, keep up great job