This was good

I love this because of the emotions in it. It was so easy to connect. I loved how Connor took care of Charlie and how Miles connected with Charlie and James. Its beautiful.

Greay last line :) hihi!

Yeah..iys me again...chapter onem..those goodbyes...loved them...so well done!

Reread this chapter. So intense...I could just feel it!

Ok, sorry for the late review, but that was just wonderful. It was so sad and emotional, but also became so sweet and tender in the later chapters.

Somehow, I knew Bass was going to suspect that James was Connor's...and Miles is right, he always just assumes. I'm so glad it all worked out for them in the end. And that Bass and Charlie finally had a child. So, is it wrong to hope the new baby is actually a girl? :)

Beautiful story, so glad you shared it with us.

Oh! Oh! Oh! I adore this! I'm only sorry to see it's over, but what a perfect ending. I really think you handled this perfectly...the grief from the earlier chapters morphed into a really wonderful happy ending. **sigh** Very well done!

Such a fabulous chapter I loved it. I knew Bass would raise James as his son I just knew it. He loves Charlie so much and that will never change. I'm really glad he moved them into a house of their own. So glad that Connor is with them too. I was shocked when Rachel slapped herwhile she was holding James, and thefactthat Bass was able to hold himself back. It seems like things will be ok between Charlie and Rachel now though. I'm glad they have a family, but who says the new baby won't be a girl :) I really hope this isn't the end, but I have to say it has been wonderful. Such a beautiful and heartbreaking story at times, but they made it through to the other side. Awesome!

LOVED it! There was so much of this chapter...and of this story...that I thoroughly enjoyed! I hope you'll have something else for us coming down the pike soon )

jenn.

So sad, but still love this story. Keep writing.

Such a beautiful chapter. His tenderness proved his love even before he spoke the words. Lovely.

Im just so in love with this story. I cant even explain it

Aww man the emotions! I am eating this story up, can't wait for the next update!

So sad. Charlie trying to hide everything and still grieving and Bass confused and then finding out what happened. Can't wait for more. Update soon please. Thank you for writing.

Loving it. So glad Charlie didn't leave. Like how Bass was helping with the baby too. Looking forward to more Charloe family moments. Can't wait for more.