The great escape

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Amazing! I mean, Rorke can shove a cactus up his ass, but what a finish! Shame it sucks so much to be Charlie right now, though... As always, an awesome chapter!

Great chapter, interested in seeing what is next for this

Jesus, what a cliffhanger! I actually cannot wait until the next chapter comes out! In my heart, they kick Rorke's ass and all is well. But in reality... well, we'll see. Frankly, though, Rorke's thing for Charlie concerns me deeply.

First, amazing chapter,
Two, Loki satellite array used kinetic strike, (couldn't access info on the array on internet so I had to uses Scott manly, the #1 expert for kerbal space program because he mentioned that kinetic strike rods aren't missiles, just the force of going from orbit is how it works )
And third, cabbages

HOLY SUTEKH

Oh, Hesh, you hothead. He's pretty damn lucky that Charlie's as badass as she is, or else he'd probably be on that damned train all by his lonesome. I'm already anticipating the ending! It's gonna be great...

Great chapter, accidentally put "exited" in previous review, meant to put "excited" or something on the lines of that

holy Ra, this is getting good

That was some really intense, dynamic writing! The action, the atmosphere, the sass- all of it was so good! We're getting really close to end-game, now, though... so I can't wait for the next chapter. This is one of my all time favorites, and I'm so glad you wrote it!

Second to last section of the actual game, don't know if you (the author) are going to extend past the events of the end of the game or just end it at where playable character is taken by rorke. Anyway I'm sort of exited to see what is in for next time, reason why is that this story puts a character in what is the player character (aka Logan), also it is an interesting concept of Logan in this being female and name Charlie

oh my god! this is so awesome!

Ahhh! I was so excited to see that there was an update! I love this fic so much... Some sibling time was excellent, and I love how Charlie continues to lay down the law by being Done with everyone. Although I am a bit afraid for her, what with Rorke being a nutcase... Can't wait for the next chapter, friend!

This Story is amazing I've read other Stories with Women in CoD but this is by faaaaaar the best

Oh god what's going to happen next?! What will happen to Charlie when Rorke captures her and does God knows what given how creepy he was in Vegas. I hope Charlier kicks everyone's asses after breaking out of that pit in the ground.