I enjoyed this story tremendously! If there were something I could advise you on though, it would be on details. Example; when at one point of the story Jane gets her arm broken there is no explanation of pain. It is obviously implied (she got her arm snapped we all know that hurts) but reading about a feeling makes you empathize with the characters. Also, Jane interacted with a lot of characters in this story, but these relationships felt superficial. They didn’t have the depth that would normally come with them. Hopefully one day you’ll get to editing and add in the small details that tend to suck people in. Still, I loved reading this. The plot is very interesting and your creativity definitely shined through.

Such an excellent fic! I’d love for you (and your beta) to write more Zoe these two. So very well written!

Amazing story... I did wonder what happen to the other gems... Did they have bonded also? It was an exciting tale I enjoyed it greatly...

Fantastic story. Shame that Jane had to disappear though for a thousand years, surely Loki and her deserved to stay together.
Fantastic story and got the happy ending in the end.
Keep writing.

Oh for Norn's sake! I can't get into reading a 43 chapter fanfic right now - I can't! I have a new chapter several months in the making to finishing adding bits onto so I can upload it, smh!

I was intrigued by the previous chapter, but this one really kicked it in for me. It was a few little things in particular that nailed it for me... Stark's opening sentence to Jane - I could HEAR his sass inside my head with those words. Loki's open stare - I could picture that so well. And that moment where Jane tried to be intimidating and Thor chuckled. You absolutely had me with those two simple words. "Thor chuckled." It was all so clear in my head... I'm so glad to find a fic that has 41 more chapters for me to devour!

... Eh, but they really ARE going to have to wait. I only have an hour or two this morning to stop myself from adding bits to that damned chapter, before the kids remind me we have a trip to the museum to make. Besides, it's probably quite neglectful to continue throwing them sandwiches like this while glued to a laptop.

Btw - I found this fic after stalking your bio following your review. Yay for having a child and a hubby - I've found another adduuuuult! Also, Zack Hemsey :D (Okay, I'm gonna slink off now... I'm not a creepy internet stalker, I swear. But you're the one reader to actually bother leaving commentary since those two chapter reposts went up, and I was curious. And looking for a way to procrastinate on my own fic. Also, I've had waaay not enough sleep and far too much coffee... I'm... I'm really going this time now...)

Wonderful story. Sorry to see it end. Of Course Arrakis is the planet in the Dune Saga. Frank Herbert sure knew how to write a whole different universe. Read all his books. Your imagination with the ending and Jane bonding with the Tesseract led her to some strange adventures. Glad you wrote her reuniting with Loki to give a happy closure. I will read this story again. One of my Loki great stories.

Awesome story, awesome ending! I finally read the last 4 chapters, and loved the twists. I never thought the Jotunns would fight alongside Asgardians and humans! SOOOO happy Loki finds Jane - I didn't see her mission coming either. When she said goodbye...it was so moving and bittersweet. Kudos!

Wow! So great an ending to a superb story. Very well done. You hit all the right notes...from tension to romance to mystery to even a little humor. I hope that you continue to share your talent with us, and delight further with Lokane tales!
Thanks for a wonderful ride!

What a wild ride! It was a great ending to a great story, and I'm sad that it is over :( do you plan on writing more lokane in the future?

Yay :)

I had a feeling it was a Dune tribute. The spice must flow!

Nooooo and yessss. I loved it. I am so sad that its over. I loved it. I hate thats over
I loved the ending but 1000 years!
Are u serious. Poor jane and loki. I hope they stay together.

I caught the Arrakis reference. I'm so very happy that her & Loki were reunited. But I'm still so sad for her. Hundreds of years alone...all her family & friends are dead...she's forcibly tied to an object that she has no escape from. She's not ever allowed to live her own life...that tesseract will come first until the day IT decides to let her die. If she was going to be with Loki...why couldn't she have been with him from the very beginning? I feel both happy & sad about the ending really. I'm glad that Loki found her, but it seems almost that the tesseract & hundreds of years alone have changed her in to a purely analytical being. It was a VERY good story though...made me go through several emotions & was VERY well written. )

I guess all things must come to an end, even good things. Great story!

Noooooo
Oh god it hurts. Why cant they be together