I love when she grabs the bar behind her as he thrusts into her, it makes me so horny and makes the scene feel real.

This is my favorite fanfiction to masturbate to, I skip over the first bit and get to when he catches her, then reread the last bit where they're fucking till I cum. This is amazing, thanks for writing it.

I LOVE IT!

omg iso agree with the top comment!

You should write one about eric and tris having a daughter together. It would be funny to read about eric trying to keep up with a little girl. Especially when she got to the age where she liked boys and wanted to revel by getting tattoos and piercings.

Yaaaaaaaassssssssss, it is soo goooddd
Thumbs up xxx

This totally surprised me for how much I liked this pairing. I really thought it was funny that Tris was muttering as she masturbated. :)

Damn ;)

Awesome job didn't know tris had it in her.. Lol

I am never going to use the bench press in the gym ever again. In fact I'm going to need a gallon of brain bleach if I ever see it again. My mind is going to conjure up a lot of yucky images of people in the gym using it for as a multipurpose equipment. Unfortunately none of them look as hot as Eric.

I loved it... I like Dauntless to the Core and am enjoying your other story about Eric being a Dad. I liked this one shot too... Love Eric too

Oh my gosh. Eric is just so ... I'm glad that Tris got what she wanted I love the two of them together. Again I don't hate Four but he's too uptight.

That was awesome.

XD I can't believe I read that! It was actually really good . I mean Eric just made it steamier. lol .

I don't think I've ever seen the word 'fuck' in the same sentence ad many times as I just did. Good job.