Reviews for Protecting The Innocence
FreyaHawthorne chapter 3 . 3/7
They hooked him up to machines, and recusitated him, all in a hospital... in Victorian England, where doctors made house calls and there was no such thing as an AED or breathing tubes or even CPR? The inaccuracies kinda pulled me out of the actual story...
Guest chapter 6 . 1/9
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read and I read a lot. I hope there are more chapters to come
Sunkissu9 chapter 6 . 6/8/2019
New chapter! Yay!
Thank you for sharing, another great chapter.
Jade St. Jms chapter 6 . 6/6/2019
Great chapter
kenn.davis.56 chapter 6 . 6/6/2019
I hope this story ends happily. Big fan of Spike/Buffy/baby stories.
Edge Cifer chapter 6 . 6/5/2019
great chapter final glad to see an update look forward to the next time this gets another one keep up the great work
math123 chapter 6 . 6/5/2019
Oh a update nice chapter I hope to see more soon. Also hope to see the other story’s.
Lessa246 chapter 6 . 6/5/2019
Love this! Cant wait to see what you do with Spike at the trails. Also, I would love to see Buffy figure out Lily is calling her mother.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/5/2019
Awesome update.
Can't wait to read more.
Please hurry with more update.
Lol chapter 3 . 6/5/2019
There are so many issues with this story so far, but I'll only mention the few that really bugged me.
- There are no bears of any kind in England anymore, and there was never any black bears on the British isles. Unless it's a circus/zoo escapee situation?
- The ventilator "breathing machine" wasn't invented till some time in the early twentieth century.
- Spike surviving. At that point in time, with those injuries, he would never have survived. Even nowadays with CPR and defibrillators such injuries often result in death.

I mean, really, I'm your typical North American high school dropout and to me these stood out like crazy.
AnimeQueenMaya chapter 5 . 6/4/2019
I love this story and I really hope you keep going with it. It is becoming a amazing outcome.
autumnchild25 chapter 5 . 4/8/2019
I love it and cant wait for more
kenn.davis.56 chapter 4 . 2/23/2019
New to this story, noted Lily calls Buffy "Mater" a few times. Means Mother. The others who can 'hear' Lily didn't seem to pick up on it, so what's the prediction? Buffy pregnant? Buffy married to Spike, ala Step-Mother? Buffy raising the Slayer Army?
Abbey Carolyn chapter 5 . 2/12/2019
Loving this, hope you come back to it, can’t wait to buffy’s reaction to lilly calling her mater x
bellerumple72 chapter 5 . 12/26/2018
Great chapter :-D! Just one thing- Buffy has lightened up a ton, even Xander is coming around...can Giles chill out too please? Just an opinion here, it's your story :-)...
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