This is a great story. I am impressed. Great job!

This is hilarious! :-) :-D :-P

Dis is funny! Do another!

O.M.G I couldn't stop laughing at the Percy and lobsters thing! Im literally crying of laughter! This is awesome!

That was a great story! Thank you! :)

This story is probably the worst thing I have read for the Percy Jackson fanfiction community. The descriptive writing is poor, the characters are severely out of character, and what is worse you rushed everything. What is wrong with you, it looks like little kids writing this.

There is a thing called proof reading, writing a first draft, editing, grammar and spelling check, making sure the characters are in character. You did none of that, that is why this is bad fanfiction and not quality fanfiction.

It's also why I'm reporting it for poor grammar. Yes, that is a rule of the site.

It has a good consept, but a little choppy, try to put a little transition, but good otherwise! :D

Love it! PLease update soon! ;-)

This is really good :) well done :)

Hahahaha oh Percy...hehehe...this was awesome. :) And I loved the John and Percy fight, that was epic. You never fail to make me laugh. :D

Haha Nico and Percy made me crack up laughing :D

YOU. ARE. MY. NEW. FAVORITE. PERSON. I LOVE CHOPPED AND PJO AND THIS IS SO FUNNY AGHHH

Ahhhh, Leo is gonna be Leo. This is really funny! Love it!

Lol! I'd watch chopped after that..definitely! I like it :3 I laughed

Two of my favorite things!