Really hope you pick this back up,there arent many out there..

Please continue this. Elazul/Heroine is one of the best pairings anywhere, but there aren't enough fics for it.

can't wait to see the update :D

omg... it's such bummer to lose 2 draftBut I'm really appreciate that you still continue this story. I'm very happy since many ff about legend of mana (imu and toto as protagonists) discontinued or already ended a long time ago. especially about female main protagonist and elazul lol
I think I found typo... like "..I was the pelican" at chapter one. in chapter 2, it confused me a bit when imu met daena... imu knows daena name when she asked another question... when daena haven't introduce herself. Also it would be great to describe other people action before insert dialogue... so readers have a moment to swift perspective of one person to other. Like when imu turned to the door, it's continue with pelican dialogue... it would be great if "...and turned to the door. I collide with fluffy white bird with yellow beak. before I can utter apologise, he wailing..." or something like that. it's also good for the dialogue to have a new paragraph rather that jumbled in one paragraf. I read ff on phone (I can't open it on web sadly since it blocked) so it's kinda crowded. in the prologue of story said that imu live her life ordinary but dragged in others affair on the way, I still have no idea how imu felt when she dragged in people's affair... Is she detest it? Is she just a person who follow the flow? can't wait how you'll bring this story. I'm curious about imu and toto relationship, I hope I can see it later. in the end, I really love your work.. I hope you have a great time making this story. Can't wait for the update

can't wait for the update

Please continue! You have a great writing style and I can't wait for you to get to Elazul and Pearl! :)