Reviews for It Shouldn't Hurt To Be A Child
tanglefire4ever chapter 1 . 9/13/2017
Aw, so sweet! If only Severus had been about to let go and forgive in cannon! *sigh*
abetternameneeded chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
Nice! You should write a story about finding the children that were abused once Severus had become headmaster? And aboutbtheirbhome life once they lived in with Avarua and hardy?
Post U Later chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
Well, That's A Happy Ending. I'm Glad Dumbledore Was Taken In, & Severus Became Headmaster, & He Was Able To Help Those 17 Other Students. Now No Child Would Ever Come To Hogwarts & Not Get Help.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2015
A story that's both sad and sweet !

The Crimson Mage.
serenityselena chapter 1 . 6/12/2015
awww... that was sweet :)
Dragonsrule18 chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
Wonderful and sad story! I feel so bad for Severus and Harry, but I'm glad they found each other.
Yuzuki Takara chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
Hi! The fanfiction you wrote is very good and unique. We need more writers who can actually spell so thank you for being one of the few. My only problem with it is the lyrics. As sad as it is, fanfictions containing lyrics, they are not allowed. Something happened a long time ago and ffn got into some trouble with copyright. I don't want another fabulous writer to go, so if you could please edit it out.
Thank you,
Yuzuki Takara
Member of Fanfiction Writer's Alliance
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