Reviews for To Be There |
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FaerieBreath chapter 3 . 6/23/2017 Simple & elegant, very nice. |
AerisHeartily12 chapter 3 . 4/22/2016 I enjoyed reading this story so much :) Please write another Anne of Green Gables one because I think you really captured Anne and Gilbert's thoughts and emotions quite well. |
whilewewereyetsinners chapter 3 . 1/15/2016 I love this story. So sweet- thanks for sharing it! |
Auna chapter 3 . 11/30/2015 Oh this chapter is so beautiful! The ending so perfect. *blissful sigh* You really captured Gilbert here. :) |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/24/2015 Great story! |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/17/2015 Loved it |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/16/2015 So wonderful! I like the way you fix your part of the dialogues with what's on the book. You can't even notice! (Well, I did, but that's just because I've read it like a zillion times). Thank you very much! |
Edkchestnut chapter 3 . 9/16/2015 Aww, this was absolutely perfect. I really enjoyed it. I think you have done a wonderful job of capturing the character of Gilbert. I also loved how he alluded to the fact that he already wanted more than friendship from Anne. This was a terrific ending. I really think that you should continue on into the other books. I would love to see you take on Gilbert's POV in AoA and AoI. I would like to see their developing relationship from his perspective and I think you would really do a fantastic job with that. Keep up the good work! |
Kim Blythe chapter 3 . 9/16/2015 That was such a good ending for your charming little story. I liked the way you ended it, i felt every emotions that Anne and Gilbert were going through all of this last chapter and it was like i was living it myself...Good job. |
hecalledmecarrots chapter 3 . 9/16/2015 Awwww! Gilbert Blythe you sweet sweet sweet sweet man! |
thescripturientbookworm chapter 2 . 8/28/2015 This is wonderful! It's like getting a second chance at reading the books for the first time- just different perspectives on everything. Your writing voice is very similar to the original series, I think, and it's a joy to read. Please do write more! |
Kuri333 chapter 2 . 8/18/2015 This is very, very nice. One of the things I love about your writing is how everybody is in character and sounding exactly how they are supposed to. Would you write another chapter? I hope so! |
Kim Blythe chapter 2 . 8/12/2015 Hi ! I thought that i had reviewed the first chapter, but i didnt. It gives me the chance to review your first two chapters, wich both were so lovely and great to read. |
YorkshireTeaDrinker chapter 2 . 8/12/2015 This was great. Lots of wonderful, delicately observed detail. That throw away one of Gilbert's, about how his father used to know the Cuthberts, had a weight of unspoken narrative behind it. I loved the interaction between Rachel and Thomas Lynde, Rachel beginning to pick up on the fact that he's slowing down, but not allowing herself to really see it. I am very excited to see the next stage. When Anne finally swallows her pride and Gilbert realises they can be friends. |
Edkchestnut chapter 2 . 8/12/2015 This was really wonderful and very true to the characters and the story. I love how everyone in Avonlea knows what's going on between Anne and Gilbert, except Anne. I hope you will continue on into at least the end of the story, when they finally become friends. I would love to see that from Gilbert's point of view. Great job! |