Reviews for Broken Proximity Zone
Eleanora93 chapter 7 . 7/10/2016
Ok, i love this! I am a Big fan of star trek as much as one piece, and i love The Way you mix them together! I mean: nami ferengi? Robin romulan spy? Perfect! And i couldn t stop laughing when i found out about The vulcan - betazoid nature of sanji! Ahahah They are pratically The opposite species XD and from The moment you Tell that He was vulcan, Well... I knew that Pon farr was on his Way! And i liked it very much! Zoro and sanji were so cute together! Space husbands Ahahah Good Job really! !
silberfuchsII chapter 7 . 6/16/2016
Good evening,
I had your story on my to-read-list for an awfully long time and only tonight did i manage to read it. And it is really great. At first I really couldn't image how the straw heads could fit into space but i like one piece and star trek so i thought i had to give it a try. And it is lovely, and funny and everyone fits so well (only Luffy is a bit to serious at times, but thats okay) and this mental-conaction-turning-into-love-thing is a great idea and the inter-dimensional-travel to the grand line and the movie clips were great. So I really loved the story. Well done.
Silberfuchs
crystalbluefox chapter 7 . 2/2/2016
This story are definitely coming under as one of my favorites. A story that I can read again and again and again. If you continue on this story as a second story to it, you'll make this reader very very happy indeed. *smiles*

Live long and prosper!

Love & Hugs
Crystalbluefox
Ominous Rain chapter 7 . 11/28/2015
This was a very nice blend of Star Trek and One Piece :) Nice job in writing everyone's expressions and actions. I just wish you added the juicy parts to the "honeymoon." *wink* Maybe we'll see a sequel. I can always wish~
Guest chapter 7 . 11/25/2015
...and weir Vulcan kissing hand to hand that makes you sleepy after a while... All of that was so interesting. And every chapter I liked it more and more.

The encounter with the straw-hats in the Grand Line was very amusing, specially how the straw-hats were so confused and how space Sanji tormented pirate Sanji... That was so hilarious.

And your comment at the end: "I imagine mind melding is like two brains hugging."... I think that was one of the most adorable phrases in all this cute little story, seriously. It killed me hahaha You are such a romantic! And I think you are right. That's so sweet.

So... Thanks you! for writing.
I realy enjoyed the story.
And sorry for the mistakes, I am horrible at writing in English. (and any language saddly.. I'm decent at speaking but not writing)

A big hug for you!
Bye-bye

PD: Sorry for posting half of my review before finishing it... I'm debora. Not that it matters lol
Guest chapter 7 . 11/25/2015
Wow this story was insanely cute. And very interesting. I've never seen Star Trek even when I love science fiction... Maybe because mostly I read books and manga and watch anime but I don't watch that much tv. Now I want to see Star Trek... but I guess it's long so I'll wait until I have more time.

I think you could have done a better job with the first chapter, it felt too rushed sometimes or that you didn't care much about the characters background. For example, some stories had a lot more details than others. But you are right: back stories are usually pretty boring... So I understand you wanted to get over it fast. Plus, it's difficult to organize so much information in one chapter. Still, introductions are important so the readers can be able to understand the universe and the context in which the story takes place, so I recommend you to read introductory chapters. At least in my case, reading helps me to write better, specially to learn to organize the ideas.

I didn't mind that you changed completely the past of some straw-hats (like Nami's)...actually, I really liked that. It's good that in an AU you make the story and the characters your own.
Also you mentioned a lot of mysterious things like what Dragon did to Luffy and if Robin was or not a spy... I believe it's cool not to know, some mystery is nice and stylish. But I'm still curious.

Then all that mind melding, mating bond, blocking the mind, building walls, telepathic conversations, feeling each other feelings and
Dyloa chapter 7 . 11/21/2015
So cuuuute
I really enjoyed this story, even without knowing Star Trek in the first place. And the chapter where they end up in One Piece original universe was really hilarious ! Wonder if pirate Zoro and pirate Sanji will be scarred for life after that... :-p

Well, see you soon in your other stories !
Mabal-One chapter 7 . 11/21/2015
Beautiful! One of my all time favorite Zosan stories! I do hope you continue this, they are just too cute and I love the crossover you've done here! Great work!
ForeverOffline chapter 6 . 11/8/2015
I can only imagine how freaky (and maybe, just maybe... enlightening perhaps?) this event is for pirate!Zoro and Sanji. It's one thing to see their space adventurer versions from another dimension. But to see them get a little too friendly... hahaha X'D Loved and thoroughly enjoyed this update - definitely looking forward to more~
Ominous Rain chapter 6 . 10/29/2015
Well there's definitely a need for conversation. That kiss was not platonic! Lol
Ominous Rain chapter 5 . 10/29/2015
Poor Zoro is lost again.
Ominous Rain chapter 4 . 10/28/2015
The chocolate! It's always awesome :) I'm glad zoro is questioning now
Ominous Rain chapter 3 . 10/28/2015
Gotta love Bones! This was a nice chapter, more mind melds
Ominous Rain chapter 2 . 10/27/2015
Lol poor boys, their practically married
Ominous Rain chapter 1 . 10/27/2015
Well this was a weird blend of Star Trek and One Piece. I love both so let's see where it goes.
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