omg, this really great story! I love you style! definitely this becomes my favourite story :D

oh man this story was so good like, I am amazed. it was beautiful and I loved it with all my heart

Oh my good this was such an amazing story. I was crying as I read the last few chapters did not expect the war at all or that it was just a story.

THIS IS SUCH A GREAT STORYFIRST OF ALL I HAVEN'T ACTUALLY SEEN A STORY WITH ALL MY MAIN PAIRINGS (KAGAKURO MIDOTAKA MURAHIMU AND AKAFURI) IN THE SAME STORY. SECONDLY THIS STORY WAS SUCH AN EMOTINAL ROLLERCOASTER ESP THE LAST FEW CHAPS. LASTLY THE ENDING WAS PERFECT OH MY GOD. PLEASE KEEP WRITING! However, one thing that could be improved is your tenseyou often change from past to present tense in the same sentence. ASIDE FROM GRAMMAR 'LION' IS GREATGREAT PLOTLINE, CHARACTERS ARE ALL IN CHARACTERS (NOT OOC) ETC. KEEP UP THE FANTASTIC WORK!

YES TAKAO'S SHIN CHAN's ARE GREATKISE WHY YOU ONLY SHOW UP NOW

I KNEW TAKAO WAS MODELLED AFTER SHINAH! AS SOON AS THE IDEA OF CLAIRVORANCE I GOT A LIL SUSPICIOUS BUT THEN THE MASK IDEA CAME AND I WAS LIKE IS THIS SHIN AH?!

so chapter 37 gave me a heart attack there... freaking auther
but ah come on... the end was THE twist.. o loved the it

I looked to see how many chapters you have...and when I saw 41 I was like damn! well there goes a week of my life flying out the window

I loved this story so much. It was a roller coaster ride for my emotions, especially what AkaFuri and AoKise (my OTPs) went through. The transition from the lovey dovey moments to the war, wow. From the moment I found this story, I knew I would like it, especially because of the AU this is set in. I wonder what happened to MidoTaka and others though. Also, the idea that this was just a book that Akashi read to his child set in modern times where he and Kouki have a family, that's pretty cool. Thank you for this wonderful fic, Kicchin!

I don't understand this chapter...explain please?

One of the best damn fanfictions I have ever read

THAT ENDING WAS FBDJWPPQHAKQQMBSBDJSK LIKE IM IN COMPLETE SHOCK BUT WHAT HAPPENED TO KUROKO AND KAGAMI! SEQUEL, HECK YEAH!

I deeply enjoyed your story, despite the grammatical errors throughout it. The characters were on point and the plot too. But what I found truly disappointing is the end. I was left so dumbfounded and angry, beacause it doesn't feel right to create a whole story with 40 chapters, making the reader be at the edge of their seat, making them fall in love with the characters and then simply tell them: "Everything you've read, is just bullshit and not real" (implying that all the time you invested in reading the story was thrown to the trash). In short the end of Lion was like a saying it was all a dream or a deux ex machina or
I'm sorry but I leave your story with a bitter taste in my mouth, I feel betrayed just like Akashi in the story.

sequelllll pleeeaaassseew

Hello, I read your story, it was truly amazing. Your plot is great and the story progresses not too slowly but well enough to make me fall in love with the setting as well as with the characters. Akashi's and Furihata's story was really cute and fascinating while Kagami's and Kuroko's was simply heart-touching and the way they just interacted with eachother was rather endearing. The other couples were portrayed really well too specially Takao's admiration and adoration for Midorima. I personally want to thank you for this is the bestest and most precious story I've come across. And if possible, will you please write any other story as well? 'Coz I've taken a liking to your style. :)