Do continue it plsss!

This story is amazing. If you can, please continue it! You actually gave the kids personalities, didn't take the easy plotline out, and show that there really is chemistry between Beast Boy and Raven. So many other stories don't do that! So, if you choose to continue, I will be ready to read, and I promise to leave my thoughts on EVERY CHAPTER! But, if life's too busy, I get that to. I've been there myself, still am in fact. Just know that I enjoyed what I have read. Thank you.

I know it took my forever, but I promised to review and I am!

So, first off, I think you've done a fantastic job with the characters. They feel older and a bit more calm and happy with their family life. It's not perfect, and the kids are pretty realistic. They're not crazy annoying or perfect angels, which is always the worst to see with kids in fiction. I really like how you've done Beast Boy - a nice balance of mature and childish now that he's older with a couple of kids.

I think you've summed up the past few years very well for doing it in such a short space - I definitely have a feel for what their family life is like. As a first chapter, this feels a bit like a set up to a happy family fic. With the way fanfiction is set up, I think you might catch more attention if you included a hint of the trouble that was coming so you could grab the readers quick.

I think you did a really good job with the dialogue. It flows pretty naturally, and I get a sense of personality from the kids through it.

There's a couple of grammar/spelling issues, but I have them all the time myself, so I don't think it's too big of a deal. I would add a little more description to the scene - you describe the characters and what they're wearing and what they're doing, but not the environment they're interacting in. I assume they're living in their own house away from the Tower, but it's hard to picture what it looks like in my head. I think that would help the story a lot.

Overall, I think you did a great job! Sorry again for taking so long!

Awesome story! You do a very good job at keeping the characters believable and like themselves. This story really had me on the end of my seat, once the obvious was stated (that Trigon is back) I didn't know what would come next and it's been putting me on edge waiting for it all to be revealed! Very mean cliffhanger you left us on, I hope you choose to continue this story! You're writing style is very clear and clean with little grammar errors so bravo on that, just try to include a little more description with the dialogue so the reader can really picture what's going on (this will make your chapters longer too). Overall really good and I hope you continue it!

You need to post another chapter! I love this story so much!

Please keep it going! I love this so much!

keep on, keeping on.

AGHHHH NOOOO THE DRAMAAA! UPDATE FAST QUICK NOW HURRY SPEEDY FAST UPDATE PLEASE please PLEASE THIS IS AMAZINGLY GREATNESSFULL!

I love it! It's a great plot, with awesome grammar. Can't wait for this to update

Make another chapter! This story is so good!

I love this story! It's really, really well written. It has next to no grammatical errors and is paced well. Raven and Gar aren't OOC and the kids are both complex and fun. This is one of the best fanfics I've read in a while. Keep it up!

The chapter didn't feel short at all! The family way the family interacts feels really natural (and very cute too.) Can't wait to read more from you :)