I love how it only took lee the number for pi to take down jirobo

I laughed at the one thousand years of death

Awesomeness

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You do realize Sasuke was "thinking" strongly about Naruto in a Negative way, not talking, ergo Naruto's ears should have been ringing.

I think this chapter gave me cancer

This fic has more than half million words, about hundred chapters and only 400 followers and 150 reviews? Well that is not good sign :)

Then I started to read this fic and stopped at the middle of the first chapter. No wonder why this fic has so low followers for that kind of size and no wonder reviews are mostly filled with hate.

Your fic, consists of random thoughts that mashed together. It is hard to understand what even happening. You are trying to pair 12 year old kids with 17-18 year old girls? WHY?! They are even younger than Ruby, why would they romantically care for some for kids?

I hope in future, you will write better fics.

While not my cup of tea and the writing could use some work, at least you finished the story. That's a lot more than I can say for 91.14094% of the stories in the Naruto x RWBY section.

Good job.

Finally completed thank you. Like to see many chapter fic completed. Fic was good but sadly you kind of fucked up but the Naruto x Ruby x Yang was the reason I came back to it when bored. Been waiting for obito to finally be defeated. Also epilogue was good.
Now the only 2 thing I hated about this fic. First one was Art. Fic became ruin after he showed up. Fic was enjoyable to read but when art came I only read this fic when I nothing else to read on to see other hated art too. Poor choice adding him. Never understood why author start there fic good only to fuck them up later on.
Second Hinata...i just hate Hinata and when Hinata end up with Naruto. Should kept it Naruto x Ruby x Yang.
I rate this fic 3 out 5. Art ruin fic big time. This fic was easy 4 when it started.

I hope you feel proud of yourself, writing complete trash and patting yourself in the back for it. Scumbag.

Why the hell do you have some sort of 'Art' character here?
What is this clusterfck of a fanfiction? Where is this all going anywhere?

You have a couple of marbles missing dude. Why do you even write it... This crap has been up for 3.5 years, it is over 500k long and it only has about 400 follows? This story doesn't have anything to do anymore with RWBY or Naruto. It focuses more on your ugly brainchild 'Art' that you shat out of your sewer brain. Re-read this story and re-evaluate it.

Gonna go ahead and mention the Volume 5 semblance reveals here.

Ren has Emotional Dampening (my word for it).

Jaune has Aura Transfer/Boost, which does heal people, but through Aura instead of direct healing.

Nora has Lightning Absorption for her semblance. Living battery, pretty much.

I'm sure you'd already know this by now if you're following RWBY online, but I'm just putting it in this chapter review since the chapter was only character info. Maybe you can edit the info in sometime?

I think a beta is really needed for this fanfic

Jesus...this story became so convoluted. So many OC's that it makes me want to puke...and wtf is the Art character? Honestly I just skimmed through this story for the most part. I wanted to see if this was worth reading...and it wasn't. This is just a pile of shit thrown haphazardly together.

Best regards

And please stop writing this crap, makes my eyes bleed

I'm now confused with the plot can someone help me here?