Absolutely love love love this story! Are you making her Klaus' mate from the Originals? Hope to see a new chapter soon! ️

Daaaaaamn, girl! That was awesome. I just binged the whole story, hopefully you'll update eventually. Pretty please? I'm excited for Mels to invade the TVD/Orignials universe, I feel like she's be great at smacking Klaus around and not taking any of his shit. There's a song called "Black Swan" by The Struts that I've had stuck in my head this whole time for obvious reasons, and it's become Mels' theme song for me ;)

SHIP HER WITH JAZZY! WAR AND DEATH GO TOGETHER LIKE PB AND J!

OMGs what if the parallel world let to THR HUNGER GAMES!?
THAT WOULD BE SO FRIGGIN AWESOME
KATNISS AND MEL WOULD BE UNSTOPPABLE.
Seriously. Consider it.
Yeah.
You have to do that. Well you don't HAVE to it would just be so awesome. Also I don't really watch walking dead or vampire diaries much but I am a huge hunger games fan so...

Ok. So I love this story. I love Mels. But I hate jacob. He is a annoying piece of junk and should stay like that. He doesn't deserve Mels in the slightest. I am sorry if I upset you with my opinion in anyway but I HATE JACOB. I understand I can't do anything to change it which is extremely disoppointing but since I can't I guess I will have to hold a grudge. BADLY. I honestly think that Mels would be fine without anyone but gets back together with Micheal. I am really sorry but it breaks my heart that you ship them it really does. Please stop. No offense but I would love it if Jacob dies a loner and spends all of eternity in taturus. I know this is like a father telling a man he can't marry his daughter but the man does it anyway and I know you probably won't even glance at this review and that if you do you might be offended which I would get but I HATE JACOB. I can't stand him. Sorry. How I will keep reading this is a wonder... Sorry again. Wow. This is a LONG review...

I like her. Cullen's are lame compared to her :)

Ship her from PJ. I don't see her with any super-natural monster or super-boring mortal.

Oh My Gods! I blame Uncle Rick for teaching you the art of cliffhangers!

Are you on hiatus or something its been almost 2 months

Umm you do realise that Egypt is in Africa, which is a continent, right? And that Sahara is not the only desert in the world? Great story so far, but maybe you should fix that.

i love this story, it could be its own series. The characters are great and the plot too. i think i can see that this is only the start of melodys adventures (i hope so)

Please update soon it's a great story

Africa or Egypt? I hate to break it to you but Egypt is in Africa, and it isn't the only place in the world with desert.

Awesome story! Keep updating

Your story is great. I can't wait for more! And the idea about Mels and the certain hybrid from vampire diaries is epic! You should totally go with it!:)