Dude, when are you gonna update? This is your only story & you haven't updated in almost 4 months.

This is the best chapter so far. Life at home is a nightmare to the Kanker sisters. On another note, I have a few suggestions on this story. Hopefully you'll hear me out. :)

Wooohooooo! I LOVE Edd x Marie pairing they always seem to make me laugh. I'm REALLY LOVING this story plz update soon. I like the fact u made Marie tell Edd to call his English teacher a 'bitch' if he did I would of laughed so hard and say "what dafuq?!' I'm really interested in your story MAN! :p
LOVE YA! TOODLES! ;)

As far as the story line goes, I have no complaints so far. Tho you might wanna watch some of the spelling ang grammar mistakes, and the location of your double quotation marks in the sentence, and the punctuation, and the you're- your and their-there-they're sort of things. But it's alright. Pretty nice to see another edd-marie fic here, this site is being flooded by those kevedd fics, sadly.

Let's get the most obvious thing out of the way - your language is atrocious. Spelling errors, seemingly random capitalization and punctiation and undeveloped vocabulary. At some point you wrote that ED started kissing MAY in spite of claiming he's afraid of her a few moment earlier.

Another thing: I dunno if that was your intention, but Ed and Eddy come off as uncaring assholes. "You know what would cheer you up? DOING MY HOMEWORK BECAUSE I CAN'T BE ARSED." That's how it looks like, and with how badly is it written, I dunno if it's intentional (which is bad writing, because it's OOC for the Eds) or unintentional (which is bad because it isn't what you intended it to be).

At the end of all this, I'm going to be petty:
"I really enjoyed the Marie and DD relationship."
Remember that episode in which she treated him like shit? And by that I mean EVERY EPISODE SHE APPEARED IN? There was no chemistry between them, if you want to ship them, you need to take that into account.

This seem like a promising story so far. The characters are in character. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds. The only gripe I have with this story is the chapters are too short. Make the chapters longer next time like at least 5,000 words. One way to do that is to 'show don't tell.' That will not only give us, the readers more information but paint a picture to are heads as well. Keep up the good work.

Welp, terrible grammar, terrible spelling, terrible generic idea, and overall terrible writing. You should have someone proofread your work, too many punctuation errors.

pretty good I feel like their Are not enough of eddxmarie fanfics.

Alright I like the idea of where this is coming from. I think I can get behind this story.