Reviews for Waking to Witchcraft
alicia7788 chapter 3 . 5/20
UPDATE PLEASE
Hallowtide chapter 3 . 2/9/2019
This is amazing and I really hope you continue
haipa-chan chapter 3 . 2/9/2019
interesting so far! I am officially invested in reading more
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2019
I love this story already. This idea is so great. 3
Rainy-Round chapter 3 . 7/11/2018
Just letting you know you've got a new follower and to keep up the good work!
srooone chapter 3 . 1/6/2018
I wish you would continue this!

I'd love to see shikako weaponize herself again. She'd probably be in slytherin which would cause some trouble.

I can also imagine her in an order of the pheonix meeting saying, 'why are we fighting magic.. with magic?' then whips out a sword. The opposition would never see it coming.
TekoloKuautli chapter 3 . 9/3/2017
I adored reading from the prologue till this chapter, I love how you handled Shikako's loss of her previous life, her family, friends and identity are now gone and she now has to begin anew again. With the horrific implications that maybe third times not the charm...

Her reaction to her family is awesome, the begrudging love towards her new parents, curiousity to her elder siblings and recentment towards her new twin is great. I feel she may even be more angry than guilty about her existence in this new world and family. Like in one of DoS chapters, she is too tired to care.

As for Molly and Arthur... wow I love how you gave them life and personality, how loving they are and accepting of their daughter they are. They worry for her because of her quirks, not the other way around. It truly is impossible not to love them and Ron is just a tiny baby who has done no wrong, no matter how much she might recent him. I also like her new wonder at the presence of magic, something that distracts her from her grief.

As for the elephant in the room: It's great how you dealt with Ginny, she's a character I admit never quite like that much but also respect. She grew up in the story of JK and that's awesome, but if you were to ignore her I can see how it would be unfair to her. Even with Septima as the other daughter Ginny would still have been the youngest and the 'girl', seeing how Septima would always have been the odd one of the family. She would still have been pampered and protected like cannon Ginny even with a big sis to teach her to be strong. Especially as now there is no urgency that the world is ending and they are not in a militaristic society (by the way, Shikako forgot most of the plot of the HP series right? In DoS she struggled to remember the Naruto plot constantly and she tried from very early to remember).

Anyway, WtW Ginny would not have deviated THAT much from cannon Ginny, I think most of her impact would have been in Septima herself. Besides, the hospital scene and how it ended gives so much room to plot bunnies! Both parents are grieving and this will change them (my mom changed slightly when she lost a little brother or sister and that pain never truly left her), Septima will wonder even if she does not remember the plot (I kind of doubt she will remember much more than the names of the main characters and general story or problem from each book). This was a great way to take it. Do not listen to others who are not in agreement, ultimately it's your fic and if they don't like it they don't have to read it, your main character is not even potty trained yet and already your story is full of lively characters and an amazingly woven story (the pace and grammar are nothing to scoff at either). It feels like yours and not a copy of Rowling's work, as it should because you are simply using a world they created and expanding on it and their characters. Besides, I always believed that a character never stops 'expanding', I prefer to refer to them as constantly growing, like people.
creativesm75 chapter 3 . 4/17/2017
very good
Axel Fones chapter 3 . 4/5/2017
Holy cow this was not what I was expecting. Now I feel awful...
Axel Fones chapter 2 . 4/5/2017
Definitely agree with your reasoning for Ginny not existing in this fic, though I'm not really sure how much that matters since comment is pretty late XD
Definitely enjoying the fic.
Axel Fones chapter 1 . 4/5/2017
Glad I found this fic. I'm mildly worried about Ginny's ultimate fate if the Weasley's already have their long sought-after daughter, but eh :P
Wicked Neko chapter 3 . 2/17/2017
Oh wow. You handled the Ginny situation differently than expected. I felt for Molly even though she's never been my favourite character... having that happen to her must've been horrible. I know a bit of the hurt and confusion they feel since I've lost a sibling like that... You did a good job! It's a bit of a touchy subject to some people but you weren't being cruel just cuz.

I can't wait for the next chapter! I can never get enough of Shikako and the kids. It's been a while since you've updated but I'm still hopeful!
Wicked Neko chapter 2 . 2/17/2017
Great story so far!

And no, I don't think Ginny should be born anymore. It's true that Molly just wanted a girl so I doubt she'd have more kids with her financial situation.
Shoetsu Otaku chapter 2 . 1/31/2017
Interesting...I'm enjoying this thoroughly.
JustForAQusestion chapter 3 . 1/27/2017
I enjoyed this and was just wondering if there was a chance you would continue it?
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