Reviews for Young Justice: Deathly Weapons
Cyber-Geist chapter 18 . 7/2
So good! I read this all in like three hours, I couldn't put it down! Can't wait for more! Excellent writing!
MindForgedMan chapter 1 . 5/26
I hope you return with a new chapter soon, and ate doing well offline!
2000DragonArmy chapter 18 . 5/14
amazing! spectacular! best fic in years! now, review time

things I likedDanny's behaviour when meeting the team. very well-written to include his ticks and attitude. also, nice touch with the anger regarding Wally's insistence any science regarding ghosts would be just crackpot theories.
- I'm really glad you didn't overestimate Danny's street-fighting skills. sometimes writers make Danny way OP, which makes it less interesting, but you did great!
- just. . . angst all around with the whole "I'm a ghost" thing. superb. wonderful. feeds my cruel, black heart.

things to improveI understand Wally's got issues regarding things without a scientific base, but he was kind of mean. yeah, he has his own ideas regarding how scientific ghosts are, but he just completely dismisses everything Danny says. rather rude, to be honest.

this fic is amazing, please keep doing what you're doing, I look forward to the next update. cheers!
Gravity chapter 18 . 3/29
Your writing style is wonderful; I can't wait to read more OuO Hope you have an awesome day!
dperson3569 chapter 18 . 3/23
I don't think Danny really needs to breath. He has been underwater and space without worry of running out of oxygen. I think since he is still half-human, breathing is reflexive at this point.
YukinaBlueRose chapter 18 . 2/27
I LOVE this story! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! OXD
It's AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! OXD
Andrea and Naturberd chapter 18 . 1/14
I don't have enough words to describe how much I love this story, but I will try, the plot seems too good to me, the inclusion of danny in the universe of young justice seems to me spectacular and the way he ends up trusting the duo I think it's magnificent, but really, I can perfectly see danny act that way after all for what has happened, I would rarely have seen such a wonderful level of writing, few times a story has had me so much time stuck to the screen, I really want to see how it progresses, although I do not write reviews I will follow reading.

P.s. Let the muse of writing touch your window
RandomCitizen chapter 18 . 1/14
Heheh I enjoy Danny...revealing ghostly stuff to people's surprise.
sKaEtrgrL chapter 18 . 12/27/2019
Great story! I can’t wait for the next chapter
Wonky Wendy chapter 18 . 11/30/2019
Oh yay! This was really great! I felt like it moved smoothly so good job on that!
Redfoxshadow chapter 18 . 11/20/2019
Great story, I'm excited to read some more!
xTorchbearerx chapter 18 . 11/14/2019
This is your best chapter and I loved reading it. I really liked and thought the League's reactions to Danny and his status were in character. You nail Wally and it's funny seeing him getting more evidence of Danny speaking the truth and Wally being bewildered because of it XD The part where Danny explains his powers to the members is also a blast to read and also the fighting scenes between him and Black Canary and M'gann. Don't though forget that the powers you described are not the only ones Danny has. The ones you wrote are the more known ones, but there are others too. For reference, look up the wiki and read for yourself. Thanks for making this cool story! :)
paolotejadaj chapter 18 . 11/12/2019
Great chapter!
Only one nick pick, you forgot to add Danny’s pyrokinesis, electrokinesis and ecto-constructions, unless you’ planning to mention them later.
I loved the interactions between the characters, it made laugh a lot.
Keep the great work!
XphiaDP chapter 18 . 11/11/2019
As nerdy as it sounds, I love reading characters analyzing other characters fighting. It leaves a lot up to interpretation as to where certain habits and instincts are formed without being caught up in the thoughts of dealing with an opponent in real time. This chapter was absolutely wonderful in that aspect and it flowed really well. I like the way Danny’s still uncomfortable with the situation along with the older members thoughts on the entire ordeal. The team seems to be doing pretty well too. Well, minus Wally who will have to wrap his mind around the paranormal first but that’s to be expected knowing him
MagicMyths chapter 18 . 11/4/2019
When Wally says Danny is "shilling 'spirit catchers' on the side" does that mean he's accusing Danny of paying people to pretend to be researchers?
I can't remember if this has been mentioned yet, but are you going to say in this story that all, or most, ghosts are the souls of people or animals that have already died? Or are you going to go with Butch Hartman's intention of the show being sci-fi instead of supernatural, with ghosts being their own species that are not created from the souls of dead beings? I hope I worded that clearly. If that didn't make sense, you can watch one of the Danny Phantom videos Butch Hartman has on his channel on youtube. I think you'll understand what I'm asking after that.
How did Connor not notice the lack of a heartbeat before?
Also, were you planning on giving Danny the super strength he has in canon? Thanks for the update!
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