I hope you continue the story. I love NCIS and Harry Potter. I was looking forward to Harry learning things from Zeva , and Gibbs , as well as when Remus starts to teach him

I do hope that you update because I have been getting into the story. I really love stories like this. Harry Potter and NCIS have to be my top favorites. The timeline is a bit off, but I like to leave it up to the imagination. I’d like more Harry squeezed into episodes of NCIS, and I hope you squeeze NCIS into the Harry Potter timeline throughout his Hogwarts years. For pairings, I’d be more into Harry and Luna, Ginny and Neville, and Ron and Hermione. For some reason I love Harry and Luna together. They seemed to click more in both books and movies so I grew fond of the pairing. Anyway, I really really really hope you finish the story because I’m really loving it, but I also do understand life can get in the way.

A 19months old, isn't he a little old to still have a changing table? The crib will only be useful for few more months. As to he Dursleys simply dumping Harry; doesn't he have some proof of birth with the passports? How did they account for lacking a child on returning to England? Surprised Petunia left that much information with Harry. Intriguing start.

Good luck

being able to block or otherwise thwart dumbledore without him knowing until its too late

not ginny- harry pls

update soon
please tell me you're going to sip the episode where he gets amnesia.
if he didn't know franks then he won't know pryde will he?
any pairings yet? ( *cough*gibbs and abby or ziva, harry and hermione or luna *cough*) if tiva, ziva does not leave ever

So far you've done really well, so if your writing style has improved, I'm excited!

I'm glad to hear from you once again and would like to propose that instead of trying to edit and "fix" your story how about rewriting it. This allows you to create from a blank slate using only the aspects of the original you want to keep without all the effort of trying to rework your original story to be more in line with what you want it to be. Whatever you choose I'm looking forward to what I'm sure will be a great read. Good luck! ;)

I love this story! I can't wait to see what you do with it next. Personally I'm a big HHR fan. I would love to see that.

Pairing Harry with Hermoine might work with his intelligence or Luna since he appears to be the artistic type. Either of those would work. As for a phobia, the only ones that make sense are either the fire or a fear of cages, not claustrophobic.

On another note, did Harry ever get those blocks removed? With the way your jumping around it's kind of hard to tell. Maybe put date markers after time jumps, like The Next Day, A Couple Months Later, or if you know the date then just put that.

Skylar Prongs Jr, thank you for a well written, intriguing story. I simply must read more. You have captured my imagination. In case you missed it, thank you.

Well damn. Saw this pop up in latest updates and started to read it only to find the most recent chapter is not an actual chapter. Following it anyway to see if it continues at some point.

Meow

Life is something that will always have to be first. It’s nice to know that you are hoping to go back through and look at this story and revise it to fit your new style. Don’t feel bad about leaving it for so long.