Hi, I hope you will read this. I've started your story last week and finished it in three days. I loved it so much that I immediately checked your other stories and read all the works on Whispers of the War Maidens. They are all excellent. Please seriously consider continuing this and Fulfil the Oath it would be a shame to leave them unfinished everything is right about these stories. Please think about it and once again congrats on your amazing stories.
PS. I also read your presentation I find your group quite touching and I think it's wonderful that you all take such interest in writing and can produce works of such quality together.

Hi! First of all I'd like to congratulate you cause this is a great story, one of the bests I've read. The story line of Temari's life got me reading three days straight, I liked the way you mixed the flashbacks with the present time, as well as the introduction of the new generation. I find both plots impressive, the one after the 4th shinobi war (I enjoyed the way Shikamaru and Temari get together... seems more real than other's I've read and much more according to both characters' personalities) and the present one. Such a pity you left the story unfinished.
It would be beyond great if someday you decide to keep this huge work and write an end for the story, it'd be worthy. I, without doubt, would read it.
Anyway thanks for this story (though idk if you'll ever read this review), and congratulations again!
It was a pleasure have found this story to read :)

nooooo it was getting so good, please consider continuing

I really hope you'll update soon, I miss this story... the effort you put into writing it it's really impressive, and it shows.

Sincerely looking forward to the next chapter. This really is a fantastic fic.

Wow. Absolutely love this fic. Just found it last night and raced through it. The amount of detail and research that went into this is so apparently. The characterizations are on another level all around. Really this is amazing. I am eagerly looking forward to a new update and to see where this all ends up.

as someone who just finished binge reading this entire fic i really need to express how fantastic it really is. the research and care used to craft this story is incredible. looking forward to seeing where it goes from here.

Really great chapter! Cant wait for the next one!

There are no words to describe how much I love this story. Every time a new chapter comes out, I end up going back and rereading some of it.
The characterization is accurate and interesting... I thought Shiakamaru was maybe a bit too passive and miserable - I get that the story is from Temari's POV, but it seemes like he showed little interest in her, besides the times they were having sex - but in the latest chapters it got better. His chat with Katamari was fascinating.

As always amazing chapter! It was so interesing to read about Karura and how much she has in common with Temari. It really showed how much Sakura and Hinata grew over the years. Pretty much potrayal of every character in this story is so complex and special. No Mary Sue detected(fortunately). :)

I love this fanfiction but I have a question. Do you plan to have Shinki ( the kid with the Iron Sand release) in this story

Great great GREAT chapter, especially the Hinata part!

I really love this story! You can easily tell how much reaserch, work and dedication it takes to create something so captivating and well written. Temari was always my favorite character in the series and your potrayal of her is so original but still kept in character. I also love the dynamics between clans and characters in general. I'm looking forward to the next update!

Good chapter.

Enjoyed this as always :) Hope the one who got surgery recovers nicely. Looking forward to the next update :)