You left us... on a cliffhanger... D'''''''X but I need to know how it ends! please update some day, but either way it's awesome. elsa is awesome. jack's a jerk. whats anna going through right now? will they ever be reunited? so many questions and more. really love your writing style and how you're not making elsa immediately fall for jack. kudos!

Update please

Poor Elsa! And what about Anna? Can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh! I see what you did at the end there. That's going to make it interesting. please update soon!

OK, so is Elsa dead or not? Because that wasn't really explained to her, and by extension us, after she fainted. I'm assuming the portal she stepped through maybe just transported her soul to Earth,...or maybe Elsa's stuck in a coma? At least those are my two current thoughts on the subject because the only other two options are death, though it seemed like Jack's sister was trying to deny that Elsa was dead, or Elsa got buried alive, and would just slowly be suffocating to death, but not dead. Another thought though, is that maybe it's the ring or rose that's doing this to her and it she say, took off the ring, she'd become tangible again...? Poor Elsa, and probably Anna as well! Whatever happened to land Elsa in this situation can only mean further suffering for both before anything gets better...and Jack wonders why she hates living with him!

I liked the way you put the unicorns in there xx

I love how you put the unicorns in it x

This is a good story it has me gripped already x #jelsa4ever

good to see u back! loving the story so far

good to see u back! loving the story so far

Good chapter. Ah learning how to code I see? Been there, done that. Was a pain. Good luck!

Okay, I don't know how I haven't read this before. Probably because I write more than I read fanfic except from a select view writers I put in my fav/follow list, but goddamn you're going in it. Beware, I'll spam your review.
I'm not really a good review giver, but your story is very interesting. I cant wait to see where it develops.

This is awesome, I think you've found yourself another fan.
Its going to be cool reading The Wings and this one in tandem, they're almost opposite not quite and that's really neat :)
I'm excited to see where this goes, it looks like an epic fic!
-heartonfire

please continue!

Woah...loving this story..please update the curiosity is eating me alive .w.