This is an excellent story! I hope to see more of this in the future!

Awesome story! everyone is so in-character and your OCs are believable.

Congatuation, you have me sitting on the edge of my seat!

A great story, can't wait for more

this is really good. like one of the best fanfics I've ever read. engaging story, fan characters anf offical character alike are equally engaging and well written, and i've voiced a character aloud in every chapter. i'm considering getting an account on this site just so I can know when the next chapter comes.

A fun story so far! I'm very intrigued with where this is going. You could do with an editor, someone to go over it and catch some simple errors and mistakes. At one point I believe I saw the word "string" instead of "sting". That sort of thing.

Some scenes could use some more detail so we don't just have talking heads in a vacuum. Other times the action is not articulated very well resulting in the scene being either disorientating or just plain confusing for the reader.

Finally, stop bloody apologizing for the lengths of chapters in the author notes. Long chapters aren't a bad thing unless the length is unnecessary. Which I do not feel is the case here. Similar to that, the whole "Sorry about the less action and more explanation" thing. Constant action isn't a good thing. Even in action and thriller stories. Readers need downtime, slower parts. These give the reader a break and make the action scenes all the more intense.

If anything, this chapter I have read, Chapter 6, was the best one yet. I was really drawn into the story here.

Aside from what I've mentioned above, this story has been rather enjoyable. We've got Nick's curious past both as a conman and with this mysterious "Nikki", the ZAIRD which may or may not be the good guys, what appears to be a massive conspiracy brewing, and what I'm guessing to be rabies is spreading. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work!

I'm absolutely thrilled by this dark tale set within the world of Zootopia. The story isn't hard to follow, and the twists come when you don't expect them. I like how the OC's have been made to fit into this world, and this is one of the more expertly written Zootopia fanfics. Looking forward to future chapters!

Great chapter! Love the story!

So far so good! Awaiting next update!

So goooooood please continue as fast as possible.

Good story, cant wait for more

Can't wait for Chapter 6 and others! Great story!

This is... this is getting interesting.

Can't wait very interesting story thank you. It actually got me thinking of a 24 Crossover. Jack Bauer, CTU, team up with ZPD or something lol.

So confused. So intrigued. NEED MORE!

How does this not have more reviews! This is amazingly well written! Looking forward to your updates.