This is a great story hope by chance you come back!

Will there be more? i love the story

i'm sure i'd be the same boat. major allergies.

this is gonna be interesting...and when he explains the bunny seems to send him there...2 heads will turn.

This is a pretty weird story a good weird at that. The story is interesting and hope to see more

This is a pleasure to read

Please write normal again... Please.

I at least know two crossovers where they got that concept I was talking about right. Some crossovers can work if they can get the concept and perspective right.

(Continuation of last comment) Still, to a degree I agree with you, but it stops at Humans shouldn't be compared or even considered to enter the story. Alright, if some random Human appears in Zootopia, it would cause an interesting panic (a story). Just like with the predators, and Night Howler except 10x worse. Those animals are sentient and more Human like, but they still lack certain things that give Humans the advantage, if only comparing to their real world counter parts. I only like Humans in Zootopia when the get it right, and how they would handle Humans; how they would react to what they're ideas and morals are. This is not for the reason "But humans are animals too, so they should at least be in the movie"; how they would see and handle Humanity.

Person a couple comments down, I beg to differ. The animals live in a society where predators and prey live peacefully together. How would animals react to a world where animals still hunt and are ferral, and Human are on top? The way how they would see Human is an interesting idea since Humans are prown to violence and war, and they live in a society where it's more peaceful. Sure they still have crimes, but comparing it to the real world, they're world is a lot more peaceful. I'm not saying all of Humanity is like what I said, but our concepts and ideas are way different then theirs. I'm not saying Humans should have been in the movie, it's more what if they discovered a world that is hostile and dangerous compared to theirs.

Another good chapter.

I assume no romance?

Well that was an interesting conversation.

Well that could have gone better (the revealing that is,).

Okay, first of all, this story is not that bad. But it is not good either. It's cheesy, boring, lacks character development, the usual things you would expect from fan fiction writers, I get that. But... I mean... I can't stand this anymore. What's with all the 'humans in Zootopia' stories? Seriously! Have you not seen the original teaser trailer? Quote: "In the world of Zootopia humans NEVER happened...". Humans !NEVER! happened. That's the whole point of the movie! All those animals ARE the humans of THEIR world. By magically introducing humans into their world (it's usually some parallel universe nonsense) you're creating a paradox. Is it so hard to stick to the original idea? The one that the creators spent 5 years working on? It doesn't help that 80% of the stories on this site are really, REALLY bad and most of them are either Judy and Nick falling in love (which is also out of character and unofficial until Disney decide to create a sequel. I highly doubt that they'll make their main characters fall in love though. It'll ruin the story and they're not stupid enough to do that.) OR some random mary-suish human appearing out of nowhere. I'm so done with this...