Reviews for The Smile Has Left Your Eyes
Schazmen chapter 9 . 3/19/2019
This was really well-written. I could totally see this actually happening!
Multipule-Characters1-Acct chapter 9 . 6/29/2018
Hey, really good story here. Love it. Idea for a sequel. In one of the previous chapters, Sans said something about Sam and Dean being the last MoL, but in season 11/12 we find out that's not the case and the whole thing with British MoL. Well, why not have them show up? And if need be, bring in the Undertale AUs. (Also I really liked the French Mistake reference you did.)
Ariastella chapter 9 . 6/13/2018
Dude, I freaking loved this. Plus, Undertale & Supernatural now being in the same universe brings about so incredible new many possibilities. Like magitech, the dimensional boxes, & access to them using the Dimensional Box app would make Sam & Dean's lives so much easier. Like, imagine having a bunch of dimensional boxes hidden away in a heavily warded vault back at the bunker & they're put on shelves, divided into pairs & each pair is sorted by the name of the Man or Woman of Letters that a particular pair of boxes.
Sam, Dean, Cass, Kevin, & possibly even Garth would be able to store their most powerful weapons a/o most vital items inside them. For Sam & Dean it could be things like the Demon Killing Knife, & the Colt.

Then, there’d be things in that they’d both have because they’re just essential;

such as a jar of holy oil each, an Angel Blade, a spray bottle & high-pressure water-pistol both full of holy water, definitely Gog & Magog’s Swords, a Rugaru Gun, the Enochian Brass Knuckles, Anti-Supernatural Handcuffs, possibly a few ammo boxes, (1 for silver bullets, 1 for Colt Bullets, 1 for Witch-Killing Bullets, 1 for Angel-Killing Bullets, & 1 for Devil’s Trap Bullets) goggles scorched by holy fire, (‘cause glasses just don’t cut it if they end up flyin’ everywhere) & maybe even a Grigori Sword if they every find another one.

Though, I can’t help wondering why Adder Stones haven’t come into the show. I mean, they’re said to allow you to see through the magic, disguises, & traps of both faefolk & witches, which seems extremely useful in my mind. Then again, in the Spiderwick Chronicles, having a Hobgoblin spit in your eye brought about the same thing, only it was permanent.

Ya know, I wonder what would happen if you were to scorch an Adder Stone with Holy Fire or wear a pair of holy fire-scorched goggles after having a Hobgoblin spit in your eyes. Would the 2 sight-based magicks mingle, bringing about an even more powerful conclusion? Would it allow you to see if a person is a supernatural or not? Maybe it’d make it so that demons & angels would always look like they had their eyes active or that monsters always had their hidden, unnatural features on display. Then again, I suppose that for Shapeshifters it’d look like they’d always have the camera shutter thing going with their eyes.
whovianmidget chapter 9 . 9/18/2017
Anazing! I loved this soooo much
biddle29 chapter 9 . 3/9/2017
I absolutely loved this! :)
AliceCullen3 chapter 9 . 11/9/2016
LOVE IT!
ArtofthePlate chapter 9 . 10/13/2016
Finally, a good Supernstural/Undertale crossover!
I love how you wrote the interactions between Sans and Dean. I appreciate that they didn't hit it off right away, even if they understood each other; it made their eventual acceptance and friendship more honest.
I guess Baby absorbed enough magic from all the hunting to have a little sentience? That was interesting.
Guest chapter 9 . 9/8/2016
Awesome hope that you will do a sequel!
JunAhrkSonaak chapter 9 . 6/18/2016
This is beautiful.
Kittling chapter 9 . 6/1/2016
Dude, give yourself a pat on the back. Because you are an amazing writer! Like, this was a really great story to read and I can't help but to praise you on a job, most excellently done.
Lewlou15 chapter 9 . 6/1/2016
Gotta be honest, I'd never even heard of Undertale before but reading your quality fiction here has made me infinitely curious about it. I truly enjoyed how you tied it all together and though I really liked the latter half of the season eight story line, I loved how you clued the brothers in on what would happen to one or the other of them if they went through with the trials. Its nice to see them get to make a semi-informed decision about their own fate. This was really well written. I also liked that Dean found Benny a place that would accommodate and even welcome his monstrous eccentricity. And Dean getting to see his scarred up true visage in that mirror of Toriel's was pretty neat. It makes me wonder if Sam's reflection would be much the same.

If you ever get a chance to write a sequel (because I'd love to see the skelebros in the bunker as well) I'm completely on board!
Firehedgehog chapter 8 . 5/31/2016
niice
Kittling chapter 8 . 5/31/2016
ok... I FREAKING LOVE THIS FANFIC! Dude, this.. is just.. incredible! Like, I have no words.
Keep up the super amazing work!
Firehedgehog chapter 7 . 5/30/2016
niiice
MisterDoctorSir chapter 7 . 5/30/2016
TF2 references yayyy!
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