I was actually scared for a minute when Raph went to his room. That was awesome!

Will this be brought up in Slash’s Revenge?

Haha! I laughed so much. Oh Mikey, why you have to do this your brothers? I love how you linked everything with the episode. That's admirable ;)

Man, this whole story has felt like it belongs in an episode, but this chapter ESPECIALLY feels that way. Every interaction is just spot on! Love it! Well done, sweetie!

Btw, Mikey...grammatically it would be a "mad, mad scientist" as the 'mad' in 'mad scientist' refers to sanity not emotional state. Sorry, CJ! I couldn't resist! XD

Mikey...I think your taste-buds are dead if you think that sandwich even had the POSSIBILITY of tasting good. BLEH! I don't know how you haven't poisoned your brothers with those noxious concoctions.

And poor Donnie. I applaud him for not throwing up upon seeing that pizza. I know I would have. (shudders at the mental image)

I love how Donnie tried and failed to keep himself calm. I can already hear him freaking out. Well done, sweetie! Onto the next chapter!

I had quite a giggle at Mikey's letting Donnie have the last slice of pizza more often comment. Yes, Mikey, your big brother is a bean-pole and needs to eat more. XD And then the argument about second hand gum? Too funny! :)

Oh, CJ. I truly love the way you write the boys. They always come alive on the screen for me. Bravo on another fun chapter!

(shakes her head) No Donnie-boy...this really isn't your day. It never seems to be when you try to do Mikey a favor.

Another fun chapter, CJ! I loved how desperately the B team was trying not to let Raph find out. And still ended up getting Raph's dander up. Donnie almost got them out of it too! A for effort, Donnie!

The intro to this chapter was perfect! After the previous chapter's admission, I could already hear Donnie's freak out in my head and you didn't disappoint, CJ! Love it!

Donnie and Mikey's interactions were spot on and so very cute! Loved how Mikey would rather drill through the lab's wall that risk being spotted by Raph! And the line about Raph smelling fear is just hilarious!

Well done, sweetie! Well done!

Omg, this first chapter is just too awesome! You have the B-Team relationship down to a tee! I'm so glad I have the office to myself today because I totally laughed out loud at the "cameras all over the lair" moment. Oh Donnie, I adore your sass just as much as I adore how it goes right over Mikey's head. Too fun, CJ!

Wish I had time to go to the next chapter today because it's gonna kill me to wait! :D

This was hilarious! Love it!

Ohh boyyy D: they're in real trouble now!
Ship the sandwich to Shredder? LOL

Uh-oh... they ticked raph off...
"Always do stuff for others so that they do stuff for you?" lol xD

Haha! This is so funny! Hope they find Spike!

Oh no! Not Spike! :( funny chapter!

This was such an amazing little story! Wow!
Every chapter had me laughing and hoping that Mikey and Donnie wouldn't get caught from beginning to end. I especially loved how you nailed each of their characters spot on.
Donnie I felt was the most amusing in this story, it was great to see how you perfectly nailed his sarcastic and witty demeanor. Donnie can still manage to be adorable even when he's sarcastic or angry. Mikey was great to, my favorite part was him looking up to his brother and him accepting his fate like a mighty warrior. Oh Mikey you adorable little squirt. Thanks again for the amazing story, it really made my night!