Yay! Allen is leader! I hope you continue this. I want to know what happens next.

I really liked this fanfiction, and I hope you continue it! :)

I ɖօ ɦօքɛ ʏօʊ'ʟʟ ċօռtɨռʊɛ tɦɨs stօʀʏ.

Shame that this story won't get anywhere, anytime soon. I'll follow this story but just make sure to keep updating regularly. Better short and updates every 1-2 days than long and years in between. If you want reviews to keep this story alive then just keep updating. The newly updated stories will be at the top of the 65 pages list. And just saying, to spice things up a tiny bit, just add Allen in the story a bit more (Kanda can go meditate till he has something to do :P). So far chomesuke has been (excuse the language) bitching around everytime it is her POV.

Oh, right, don't write what the point of view is, or who's point of view it is. It's irritating and interrupts the flow. If you're writing is any good at all, your reader will be able to tell which character the scene is focused on. And it is good enough.

However, you've already had two full chapters of third person. There's no changing the point of view in the middle of a story. You pick one and stick with it the entire time. Same goes for tenses. This story is past tense, don't switch to present. Not saying you're making ALL these mistakes, just giving you some advice as an experienced writer.

Interesting. You've chosen to do something that features Lavi paired with Chomesuke and therefore alienating 99% of all the other Man writers, as well as attracting flames and hate-reviews from the reams of Laven shippers.

THANK YOU! For the love of god, do not leave this story unfinished. Even if it turns out to be crap, it's still a new story and not just the same thing being rehashed over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again ad nauseum infinitum. No one writes anything but the same Yulluen and Laven stories. I'm sure there are at least two stories that are entirely identical by different authors just because every possible thing with those pairings has been done!

Thank you for actually adding something to the table that can actually say it's a new story.

Lol~ I have a feeling Kanda's gonna fail his job sooner or later...

Aw poor Chomesuke! Leeches are nasty...

As previous reviewers have pointed out, it was unexpected that Allen became the leader - but he does seem to be doing a good job so far.

It'll be interesting to see how they're going to survive until help comes.

Aww, so he ate fruit. *disappointed* I was hoping he'd either fast and not lose an ounce of weight or energy, or somehow magically have his soba. But hey, Mugen! :D And I still need to upload that fanart! And Allen's thawing. *coos* Good job, Lenalee. No, this isn't a wedding dress I am stuffing in my bag. No, this isn't a suit I hiding behind my back. No, this isn't a camera I am pretending is a block of wood. WAIT, DON'T DESTROY IT, IT WAS EXPENSIVE! Ahem, anyway... ... *sighs* Daisya is tormenting Lala, and the sad part is that she's going along with it. I can't wait 'til we finish the "it gets worse" part. And leader Allen, WOOT! I fully approve! High five me, Lavi! And the heart to heart between Allen and Lenalee was adorable. X3 And oh gosh, Timothy cuddled Kanda and lived? D'awwww. ... He's right behind me, isn't he. Well, it was a great chapter and now I've got to RUUUUUUN! *flees*

Allen, taking charge while in doubt of being a good leader... and turns out to be the best one for the job...

Kanda: *Chases after Lavi swinging his sword some time later*
Allen: *Facepalms* You had ONE JOB, BaKanda...

Allen is the leader? That is unexpected with all the avoidance he's been doing, but I am glad that it's him. There is something strange however since the pilot and the others who venture into the jungle to search for anything hasn't come back and it was near the end of the second day. Something could have happen to them it I wasn't mistaken. I do wonder what kind of trouble they will run into in the island because they can't stay on the beach forever. Really hoping to read some action with Allen fighting something to protect everyone, as in they are shock to see how Allen fights. I can't wait to read what will happen on their third day on the island. Watched episode 2 DGM Hallow? Love the new first thing appearing in the opening theme.

While they were sorting out their pecking order Kanda has spent two days on his own. Found and fed himself on fruit, and water, given he didn't return to camp for water... yes, he is capable of solo survival. Allen took on the most unenviable position willingly... hope he has something for the frequent headaches he'll enjoy. And Lalla is doing a wonderful job of being Daisya's comic relief. Looking forward to more.

(*reads* *chuckles*) He really did bring a katana...
Lol, and Timothy, he's an adorable crybaby (only in private), and Lala...Oh, Lala, never thought that she could be that vain.

And Allen! You're finally stepping out of your shell!

And that last line about Kanda GLORIOUS!