Reviews for Fragile Atlas
Osiria Rose chapter 1 . 8/7/2018
This is goddamn freaking beautiful, I can feel tears behind my eyes TT And you've given me new insight and understanding into the Lions' personalities. Thank you and well done
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 1 . 3/21/2017
What a lovely little insight!
JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
This is excellent! Some parts were confusing, but the language and concepts are beautiful. I haven't seen anyone else explore the relationship between Zarkon and the Black Lion; I like your ideas for how it may have happened. I also like how you drew a parallel with Shiro hurting Matt, a memory that must weigh heavily on him. Good title choice too, I understood it by the end. I think there is some room for grammar revision and other details-for instance, you say a thousand years but I think that's supposed to be ten thousand. Overall, great job on this; I can't wait to read your other Love Songs of the Lions!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
This is awesome ! Good pacing and characterization, creating a well rounded story. Keep up the great work!
koolkame chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
I like to canonize this in advance, it's really where I hope to see Shiro and Black at the start of Season 2. Good work!
Rangergirl3 chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
Holy Freaking - WOW. This was AMAZING. Really, really well done. :-) I'm trying to find words to express how much I enjoyed this...but I'm really having trouble finding them. Great job. Absolutely a wonderful read. :-)
JJ chapter 1 . 10/1/2016
I really like this take on the Black Lion. I never looked at it this way before.
ByeByeBriar chapter 1 . 9/5/2016
Lovely. I like the way you have Black Lion talk.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2016
Holy shit that was incredible. That was honestly better than any backstory or detail or emotion or in-depth explanation of their relationship I could ever reasonably expect the show to give. That was really ridiculously good and you should be proud of yourself for writing it. This might have been the best Voltron fic I've read so far, and I've been reading a ton. Again, wow! Super well done!
Mariyekos chapter 1 . 8/15/2016
Wow! Fantastic story. Thank you so much for writing this, as it was a great way to spend a few minutes!
A Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2016
Hi! I really really enjoyed reading this fic. I love the relationship analysis, and the general analysis of what the lions represent. I love the way you told the story, in flashes and snapshots of feelings/memories. I also like the use of artistic license with the backstories. I enjoyed it all! Keep on writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2016
THAT WAS AMAZING FML
Anony-mouse chapter 1 . 7/18/2016
This is really good! I love the interaction between Shiro and his Lion, and the connection they share. The way they see through each other's eyes and use their eerily similar experiences to get the point across is very interesting. Great job!
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 7/17/2016
That was an interesting introspective.
not paranoid enough chapter 1 . 7/17/2016
Damn - this is excellent! This is a fantastic and insightful character study.
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