Don't just leave us hanging! Are you ever~ going to get this story started?

The irony is, Yang (with Blake) did just that in the most recent series of "RWBY". Well, Gambol Shroud, Blake's own weapon, but still...

I really wanna see Mordred with Jon
mostly because im sick and tired of how Daenerys and Jon are perfect together
seriously though its not they seem like that couple where a person stays even when they start to abuse that person

Don’t know how long ago you wrote this but damn, I adore the concept! Making Mordred Tywin’s heir is pretty interesting. I wonder how much they butted head about here swordfighting though xD As for a pairing. I personally would lean more towards Willas. While I can definitely see Mordred sympathizing with Jon and them even becoming friends, I feel like with his selfless ‘perfect king’ attitude he’d piss her of way to much by reminding her of her father... That might put a damper on things... plus I would really love to see her interact with Olenna xDDD I mean that woman schemes with the best of them and I can see a sort of grudging respect/ despising eachothers methods thing there considering what Morgana was like xD

i really love this whole idea with Korra going to Naruto World. i'm really curious to see what will happen when the Uzumaki's discover her bending, would they think it's some kind of kekkei genkai? and i wonder if Korra kept her previous memories from Republic City.

A very, VERY good concept. Playing on Tywin’s trauma (because a man like Tywin would be traumatized by that, if him not marrying anyone else was at all a sign) and making him feel actual sympathy for Tyrion, as well as gaining an heir. Very good. All you have to do is work on your writing; give more details, don’t just make everything so bland. Put some flavor savor in your writing bro.

Wizards wouldn’t become Mrs. Potter.

As always I'm impressed with how you take the elements of the series you used for the fic and make the story your own.

Very interesting chapter. I like Harry's sense of humour. Also his interactions with Iskandar are very interesting and entertaining. :)

I enjoy reading your crossovers. Especially since your one of the few writers who seem to figured out how to power balance characters from different universes instead of having one side of the crossover curb stomp the other side. Unless it’s for a crack story then you make the one sidedness entertaining to read.

Okay, nice chapter...but I never thought that Kiritsugu would ever be the sort to win the allegiance of Atalanta. Kiritsugu would shoot a kid if he needed to for his mission, though kids seem to be one of the few he'd truly regret killing. Atalanta would turn him into an arrow pincushion the moment he did so. Actually, I'd just gone back and re-read the second chapter. I didn't remember that Kiritsugu had fathered two of the Edelfelt kids...

Also, while Harry would be courteous, even sociable with Iskandar, I don't think he'd agree so readily to helping him conquer the world. I do like his interactions with Arturia, though. There should've been more of them in the previous chapters...

I would love to see this actually become it's own story on of these days.

Not a bad start. Sorry for inflicting the game on you, though. ;)

Good intro.
Looking forward to more.

Question, any chance that the exposure during the Singularity causes Ichigo's powers to reappear and manages to save Olga?

Also, any chance of his Zanpakutos appearing as Servants?

Nice start to a story.