You just set the most frickingly annoying high bar for all fanfiction and honestly I’m a little mad at you. You know how hard it’ll be to find a fanfic I enjoy after reading your stuff? I’m already a picky reader, after this I’ll only be content with fanfiction’s equivalent of caviar. AUGHHHHHHHHH
I wouldn’t change a thing though. It’s incredibly refreshing to find a Pertemis that isn’t just “oh hey he hates men too, and he’s hot — so let’s make them kiss!“ I legit have so much respect for your writing process. Well done. Finding things they have in common, writing about how they actually bond (with a little bit of blind faith) makes this one of the best fanfiction stories I’ve ever read, and definitely top five when it comes to shipping an unlikely pair in a story.
Jolly good, old chap, keep the work up!
I’m not British but I’d make a great old British guy. It’s just in my genes, I’m sure of it.

This was amazing to read great job being original!

Fabulous story.

Amazing.

Giving up her immortality is such a statement, worth more than 10x immortality on Percy's side.

That was pretty cool story

The story disgraced the goddess of the hunt. It's a very beautiful romantic story and would have been better if had been anyone else other than Artemis, Diana, Minerva or Hestia.

I’m impressed. That was very well done. I feel rather profoundly touched.

You haven't forgotten us, have you? I mean this in the politest way ever (really) but man, coming to check your profile every week and finding nothing... Well it's tiring. But really loved that you've updated your bio. You are still around right?

this was such a fantastic fanfic i just wish there was more

This was really good! Great work :)

That was the most amazing fanfiction I have ever read. The characterization and pace were perfect, and the message and theme themselves were beautiful and left me in tears by the end of the story. If you haven't already, I think many of us would like a one-shot of Pertemis at the age of 40; see where they end up.
Again, fantastic story. Made me think a lot about life and love. Thanks a lot for the experience!

Such a great story. It was so fulfilling. A magical experience. I sincerely hope that you keep on writing stories such as this one. Once again, Great story..

Beautfiul written, gripping, and strikingly realistic. This is a rare work of art that far surpasses the standards of even the highest rated Percy Jackson fanfictions on here. Well done.

I never write comments, but it is an exception.
This story is beautiful, it explains an impossible romance but that many want it to be, but unlike other stories here if there are reasons for this love to arise. I will read it again sometime, because to be honest I loved it.
(Sorry for my english, I am aegentinian.

After months, I had almost forgotten how beautiful this particular chapter was. That dance, that specific line "Am I mood mad?"... Just goosebumps all over my body... Beauty at its finest.

Bruh on Jah this is some of the best fanfiction I have read. It's so real, it feels like its directly ripped from a forgotten script of the Heros of Olympus or Percy Jackson and the Olympians book