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How could you make me salivate about the murder pair and stop there?! Please continue

Soooooo... Where's that two shot?

I love u and blackkkat for giving us this amazing pairing. Can't wait for the next update.

And now that I've read a few Obito/Reborn fics, I can totally see the appeal. I hope this gets expanded on.

Oooh... I like this. Can't wait for the rest of the story. Here's some questions I have that hopefully inspire you to write.

1. Did Obito rescue 5 or 6 children? It is stated that Obito rescues first 1 child than an additional 5 for a total of six, but it was later written that Obito has rescued only 5 children.
2. How were the dimensional kidnap victims chosen? Was it people with large flame potential but little chakra and/or weak people? Because it seems a little odd that, so far as we know, all kidnappees were either children or nearly dead. Was it a choice on the part of the neo-estraneo or a condition that made safe passage more likely? Are they all from Konoha? Do all the children possess bloodlines? Is there one of each flame type? Choice, chance, or cooincidence?
3. Will the children become guardians? Will Reborn just be in a relationship with Obito, or will he be a gaurdian too? Will Obito have more than one gaurdian per flame type?
4. Will Obito and Reborn ever admit to being in a relationship? Or will they disguise it well enough for plausible deniability? I can just imagine them sparring, and agreeing to take the winner out to dinner. And neither would admit that it was a date or something.
5. How do ninja and Mafioso compare power-wise in this crossover? Because in canon, the ninja would probably kick Mafioso butt, but such a huge power imbalance would be less interesting in a crossover. I think that Obito and Reborn would have the most fun challenging each other, sparring, and taking hits together if they were matched reasonably well. Seems like a proper date, KHR style. I feel like Reborn would respect Obito more as his sky if Obito was a little bit stronger, but not so much stronger that Obito wouldn't have to put in some serious effort in to take Reborn down.
6. Will chakra still be a thing in the KHR dimension? Will it be hampered? Will developing chakra systems be stunted? Will chakra be passed on to the next generation if anyone has children? How do flame and chakra systems interact?
7. How Will Obito and the children fit into the mafia world? Will they start a new Family? If so, where will their territory be. Will they join an existing one? Will the children join Vongola and Obito stay freelance? Will some choose different paths/occupations? Will some choose to be civilians?
8. Will dimensional transportation be a thing? Will any of the children make it back? Will only some of them choose to do so? Will it take enough time to set it back up that the kidnapping victims are already settled into their new lives? If Obito returns for some reason(somehow sounds like a bad idea in his case), will Reborn follow? How feasible is it to keep the portal(?) open? Is opening it very expensive and there for not done often, can it only be done during certain seasons/mooncycles/ect, does it cause stress on the dimensions and should only be used once every year or so, does going through too often cause medical problems, or can it just be open perpetuously. Will there there be communication and trade between the two dimensions? Who exactly will be aware of the information, and who would have acess to the portal? How would the two dimensions be affected politically, teconologically, culturally, ect.?
9. What are the personality traits of the children? Did they have goals in life? What were their family dynamics like? Were they typical examples of their clan, or outcasts? How will they mourn for their lost dimension, or will some be glad that they don't have to go back(ie, an orphan with little hope for the future)? How will they and their goals be effected by this change of situation? Will some adapt better than others? How will their characters be differentiated from each other beyond their powers? Will the new(?) presence of flames in their system affect their personalities, and how? What social class were they part of as a community, and within their clan? How does this influence their personalities, and how do they change as they adapt to their new surroundings.
10. Would it be possible to have an epilogue, like, how have things settled down after 1, 5, or 10 years have passed?

I know that it would be not be feasible to answer all of these questions in a 2 or 3 shot, but I think that it is interesting to think about where this fic could go, and the concepts that it could explore. Well done, looking forward to the next update.

Great idea!. I would love to see more!

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I'm excited to see how this goes! Although, you might want to edit the content so it's more consistent, considering how Obito recruited Orochimaru into Akatsuki, when Orochimaru defected from Konoha after being exposed for conducting human experimentation. The most prominent case of Orochimaru's experimentations is Tenzo/Yamato, who was the only one to survive out of 60 children that Orochimaru experimented on with the Mokuton. Obits's being a hypocrite if he says he can't stand human experimentation (especially on children) here in this fanfic, b/c he certainly was able to handle it in the Naruto 'verse.

Podrías aser un fem obito x Reborn. Por favor

I would love if this was a two shot. Just saying. But it doesn't have to be. I'll follow it just in case. ;P

Awesome one-shot so far! I love the idea of an Obito/Reborn fic! The Murder Pair is a name that definitely suits them :'D
Great Job!

Fabulous writing. I know constructive criticism is the aim of the game but it was pretty flawless to my AM hour eyes. Thank you for your effort!

THANK YOU! OHGOD THE SNARKINESS IS SO AWESOME! XD

THANK YOU!