Reviews for Overlordly broken
Asura chapter 24 . 8/1
Was chapter 25 deleted? I wish I had read it, since people talked so much. Too bad it was deleted and I don't think the author will post it again, too bad!
cally.lloyd.14 chapter 13 . 6/25
Ninya is a Girl dressed as a boy! just thought you want to know.
Maurz chapter 1 . 5/31
copy and paste of overlord with a boring self insert sidekick for momonga
sohrabsadafi.eco chapter 1 . 5/1
its like you copy and paste the original and change the main character in the process so the plot hols are very odd and frequent, as a result the story is very boring.
I did not like it at all.
bimboom chapter 8 . 4/24
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Iwillwritegoodoneday chapter 3 . 4/11
Why gederbend why such a good story and the fu...
Pinesterrrr chapter 24 . 2/24
HnnnnnnNnNNN I LOvE tHiS SO mUcH! AHhH it’s such a nice ending that just rips your heart out and shoves it into a blender! I am terrible at writing comments but Oml I love this a lot and I am so happy it’s completed just so it won’t be leaving me on a cliff hanger, but also upset that is over (just a bit tho). Anyway, 11/10 would read again
Pinesterrrr chapter 9 . 2/24
Ok first, I love this fic so much! I am speeding through these chapters like crazy. But this small thing stopped me for a second (not too big of a deal, just noticed it and I can’t stop noticing it xD), but isn’t Ninya a girl in the Overlord series? Again, not too big of a deal overall it just distracted me xD
Anyways, I’ll right an actual raving comment once I’m done catching up!
588963-B chapter 24 . 2/3
I have mixed feeling about the ending, on one hand I think it was very creative, but on the other I REALLY wanted to see her kill the elf king.
raptor250 chapter 18 . 9/16/2019
By the power of Grayskull... I have the power! ... Lol love this
KenpoDragonRoar chapter 9 . 9/15/2019
I can’t read this the grammar is just too bad for me
WightGrimmBorn chapter 24 . 7/23/2019
I'm actually crying for her death I'm CRYING I never cry why would you do this to is
TeraBaapBSDK chapter 3 . 2/9/2019
its no fun reading same stuff over and over again
akilou.issifou1999 chapter 9 . 11/28/2018
long live clemintine
akilou.issifou1999 chapter 8 . 11/28/2018
thanks for the story good to see that u enjoy akame ga kill
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