Reviews for Sandcastles
yabadabado chapter 1 . 4/5
Please finish this story! It is beautiful and amazing. Love your writing!
Guest chapter 5 . 12/20/2018
I really enjoyed this story
yabadabado chapter 5 . 9/7/2018
This story is beautiful! I would love to see what happens but I understand life can get in the way. I hope you will finish this someday though!
mzlizbiz100 chapter 5 . 7/15/2018
Liked that you are not providing an easy remedy or "getting over it". Being betrayed by your other half is devastating. Would like to read how you get them past his infidelity. B
Guest chapter 5 . 3/25/2018
Please come back to this
Guest chapter 5 . 12/23/2017
This is my 4th time reading this lol & every time I hear Sandcastles by Bey it reminds me of this story. Hope you’re well and happy holidays
Guest chapter 5 . 11/14/2017
Oh my god. I don’t know why I never found this story until now but I cried multiple times at every chapter. I literally was clinging onto your every word. This was so beautiful and painful and devastating.. so emotional. I love it! Please continue to write, you are very talented! Hope to hear from you soon
Guest chapter 5 . 11/10/2017
I love this story so much! Need more
freckled98 chapter 5 . 5/29/2017
Baby steps
kelleekellkell chapter 5 . 5/19/2017
That was a powerful chapter. I hope they are able to overcome his infidelity. And for the record, I never would've guessed that writing was hard for you these days. You are a phenomenal writer, and I've missed reading your stories.
daniellescandal chapter 5 . 5/17/2017
Wow! I had forgotten about this story so went back and re-read it and its amazing. My heart aches for them but I am excited to read their journey back to each other. Fitz should start showering Olivia with small gifts, messages, flowers now and again and just let her come back to him. Keep up the good work! Please update soon!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2017
Gosh sooo ELaTED ur back!
Am dancin literally!lol
Av missed ur stories esp MORE TO LIFE
Like I nid an update Asap!like my breathin depends on it rite now!lol
Pls Pls update MORE TO LIFE
Nice update I must say
Guest chapter 5 . 5/17/2017
Glad to know uv not given up on ur stories
I appreciate ur effort despite d break
I wish writers ar dis considerate
U did a good job for som1 dat av supposedly forgotten her plots cnt imagine hw gud it wld b now dat ur back in d swing of tins
Cnt wait
Guest chapter 5 . 5/16/2017
Welcome back! You were missed. :) Loved Liv in this chapter. You captured her heartbreak and pain perfectly. The self doubt that all women who've had their partners cheat feel, questioning if he smiled for her the same way, if he was as charming, as romantic? The trust is broken and it can't be earned back until she gets her time and space. I'm glad that she's living with her sister now and he's giving her that space. A little concerned with Fitz's self-flagellation. He needs to realize that THAT is what got him in this predicament in the first place! Keeping everything in, turning to alcohol and his secretary. He needs to stop beating himself up and apologizing to Liv and start working on what is happening with him that he is so deeply insecure in his relationship with her. She deserves better than to work things out with a man who cheated on her but it is what it is and she has chosen to work things out with him so here's hoping that they do.
carlijnlijn chapter 5 . 5/15/2017
It's so good to hear from you again! I had to reread the last chapter as well, but that was no hard task :)

It's a good thing they are still talking and trying. Hope to read more of your updates in the following... months. We readers can't complain because we have the easy job by just consuming what you create. Thank you!
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