There's no hope is there, that you continue the story, because it's really good

This is great! I love the pickup lines. I hope you still plan on updating and completing it... and that you do soon. Sooo good!

PLEASE UPDATE. OMFG. This is one of the best ShikaTema stuffs I've read. You've portrayed Temari well too. She's so feisty and the way they started is really interesting.

oh my god this is so cute! i hope you’ll continue this

I hope you'll continue thisss!

Ohhhhhh my gosh, please update this, I can't wait to see where it goes! Quality AU right here.

love it. i hope for another chapter soon! i really think you've portraited Temari well!

Pleaseee up datee i love this storyyy

You need to update this story. It's brilliant and original. Please post soon.

It was really surprising that Temari is engaged to Neji, maybe you can have Neji/Tenten later. Shikamaru sure knows how to get Temari's number, very charmingly but still set on his goal.

Also the pick up lines are really creative.

Ooooh, NejiTema, LOVE IT

Nice story really. I love ShikaxTema. Their interactions are so funny.
But really did Tema need to be engaged to Neji? WHY NOT SASUKE?
I would love to have TenXNeji!

Pleasee up date this story is soo good

Love love love it. It's so unique. And your pickup lines are amazing and unique. Waiting for update.

Goodness, is Temari engaged but just gave her number to Shikamaru?! He's quite the persistent, smooth operator, but it will be interesting to see how he proceeds if Tenten tells Neji.

The pick up lines make the story unique and you've had a pretty amazing update schedule. Thanks for sharing!