A lot of the character interactions seem a little stilted, or cut too short. But I really applaud your sense of how organizational (particularly military) relationships between people work. Its not made-for-tv wise cracking or open hostility. There’s legitimate planning, working out the details with the input of others. Actual reasons for how people in hierarchical organizations react to the push and pull of insubordination vs taking into account the humanity of the people involved, etc.
Nicely done folding in Lost in Space into SGCanon.

shit don't read

Well a great story has come to end . In a way a good end but I would have also liked Smith in a nice prison cell

What an AWESOME ending! Love how the table was turned on Dr. Smith-he got what he deserved-NOTHING! Thank you for creating this universe, and I hope you write more in it.

HAPPY, HAPPY ABOUT DON AND JUDY! Smith is a pill-always looking out for just himself-hopefully Ronan will teach him how to play nice.

Well seems like Judy and Don het together finally. Great chapter

WOW, what an amazing twist! Poor Don and Judy-they just can't catch a break!

Nice chapter but why do the Robinsons het home? I mean wouldn't they be security risk for the SGC? I mean reappearing like that, how are they going to cover it up?

LOVED the reunion and the forever(?) UST between them-would love if that was resolved. So. now my curiosity is peaked about Don's abilities with ships-guess I have to wait for your next update-oh, the pain, the pain!

Ok, didn't expect that. Good chapter

The detail for the rescue was great, BUT NOW I NEED TO KNOW THE DETAILS OF THE REUNION OF JUDY AND DON-YOU STOPPED TOO SOON!

Not bad but a very rushed chapter. The flow was simple too fast.

Well looks like rescue came the last second. Now they only have to search for two more lost sheep . Great chapter but I missed the Robinson and Major scene

I just found this tonight, and I AM COMPLETELY HOOKED! Looking forward to your next update.

Well great chapter