This was an amazing and inspiring story. Except for the violence (which was deserved by the way) this book should see the light of day

DOIOIOIIIO WHAT THE HELLLLL

First words i read: MURDER MURDERER KILL KILL, me: well Fudge

Dear god this was good...

I loved that the "Douche-bag Trio"- Sting, Rufus, and Orga- got what was coming to them, and that more of their victims found the courage to step forward and share their horrific experiences to ensure that these three couldn't do the same thing to anyone else in the future. I wasn't surprised in the least to see Rogue also get punished for his role, though not as active as the other's roles, in what happened to Lucy. It was nice that Layla showed up everyday to support Lucy in Franky's absence, and that Layla brow-beat Jude into ensuring that Franky had the best doctors on his case. It wasn't surprising that hearing Natsu's voice is what brought Franky out of the coma when he was close to regaining full consciousness to begin with. But all in all I'm glad that Franky will make a full recovery, despite the paralysis of his left leg. I was surprised that Franky's older sister, Yuuko, had been trying to visit, was apologetic about the whole situation, and returned the necklace that Franky had given to her as payment for her helping Lucy. I, however, am not surprised that Franky's birth-mother is suffering from "sever psychosis" over what she did to her own child. I am sad that this wonderful story has pretty much come to an end. I look forward to reading the FINAL chapter/epilogue when you get around to posting it. Thank you in advance for taking us, me, on this wonderful journey.

Lol, Francis woke up from his coma at the sound of Natsu's voice, that is so priceless. Excellent chapter.

Please write more

I'm kinda sad that this story will be ending soon. I did enjoy Francis' personality. I hope that there is a somewhat happy ending, meaning that Francis wakes up after that little chat he had with his younger self and becomes the man that he was meant to be, that Lucy and Yukino get justice for the crime that was committed against them, that those who committed the crime against Lucy and Yukino get there just desserts in prison (Gang Raped and beaten to within an inch of their lives in prison 3:) ), that Francis' mother does get the much needed mental health help that she so desperately needs, that Jude gets his comeuppance in the form of divorce with Layla taking him "to the cleaners" and leaving him nearly penniless and destitute (much like he was the last time that Lucy saw him in the anime/manga before the whole Tenrou incident), and that Francis and Lucy go on to lead happy lives in the wake of all that has happened . That is what I'd like to see happen in the end. But this is YOUR story so you can write the ending however you please and we, the readers, will have to deal with it.

Great chapter. I had tears in my eyes reading Frank's POV.

Wow! I do not usually leave review, but dang! This story is refreshing, despite that it deals with some OCs, OOC moments, and some pretty sensitive topics. I have no complaints and this story has honestly kept me on the edge of my seat, I didn't see Francis getting shot or Lucy almost killing Natsu coming! Looking forward to the next chapter!

~ Nobody Important

Never thought Lucy would try to kill Natsu, thought she may hit or slap him for the kiss but to attack him like that I'm...wow. Don't kill Francis, please don't. I don't think Lucy can handle Francis death with all the other stuff that is happening to her. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chap.

Nnnnnnnnoooooooo, don't kill off Frankie.

Got that out of the way, great chapter.

loooving the story! please update soon

Yesssss rip his heart out Francis! I love overprotective older brothers. they make stories so much better. cant wait for more.

LMAO, and Frankie calls Mira demonic. A boy goes near his little sister and all hell breaks loose. Great chapter.